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Untitled..
Contributed by
karinagutierrez121
on
Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 05:56:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Trying to swim,hoping for someones
hand.The tide is pulling you back,
you can barely breathe.It feels as if youre getting attacked at sea.
Your lungs can only take so much,you try to see the nearest opening but the rocks
are tearing at your knees while everyone sits and stares
not doing a thing.You see an angel start to sing,they carry you and
help you to your feet.
On the ground youre trying desperately..
but they cant see your attempts to be what they call "amazing"
Youre not surprised that they dont care..but as someone approaches you in
your despair they take you hand and see..you want to be known for something.
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karinagutierrez121
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2009-12-16 17:56:47]
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Re: Untitled..
(User Rating: 1 )
by Keykey on
Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 04:54:52 AM AEST
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| This poem touched my heart. It reminded me when I was a child how no one would reconize me. Then finally, a girl said hey to me. We've been friends ever since. |
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Re: Untitled..
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by foreverinsane on
Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 05:39:56 AM AEST
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| this is really good. reminded me of my best friend. |
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