Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 12:19:49 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 155984 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The great fall [time] => 2009-12-16 08:46:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Feel the burn, that lasting ache
Your perfect world begins to shake
He can't see the good you are
Distance grows, you feel so far
Shoot the ones who shot you down
You're in too deep and now you'll drown
You wish for him to mend your heart
To fix inside, that broken part
But he just laughs, despite your pains
Resentment fills your flowing veins
Inside your mind, repressing thoughts
Where are friends? they're gone....or lost
Sometimes you wish the dreams weren't real
To give your pride some time to heal
You stood up proud, and took the fall
Was the drop well worth it after all?
What's left to show your victory
but battle scars and memories?
Nothing now, that's what you have
He took it all, and won't give back
Just let him go, he's lost it all
Give the man a wake up call
Let him see what he's done wrong
He'll finally see that you're strong [comments] => 1 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 22 [informant] => DemonQueen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The great fall

Contributed by DemonQueen on Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 08:46:40 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Feel the burn, that lasting ache
Your perfect world begins to shake
He can't see the good you are
Distance grows, you feel so far
Shoot the ones who shot you down
You're in too deep and now you'll drown
You wish for him to mend your heart
To fix inside, that broken part
But he just laughs, despite your pains
Resentment fills your flowing veins
Inside your mind, repressing thoughts
Where are friends? they're gone....or lost
Sometimes you wish the dreams weren't real
To give your pride some time to heal
You stood up proud, and took the fall
Was the drop well worth it after all?
What's left to show your victory
but battle scars and memories?
Nothing now, that's what you have
He took it all, and won't give back
Just let him go, he's lost it all
Give the man a wake up call
Let him see what he's done wrong
He'll finally see that you're strong

Copyright © DemonQueen ... [ 2009-12-16 08:46:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: The great fall (User Rating: 1 )
by ChaosFactor on Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 08:31:46 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I love love love this. Sometimes, you have to let someone go so that they can realize what they've missed. You can feel the strength in the words.. Don't ever let anyone tell you that giving up is weakness. The truest strength is in knowing when to go and when to stay.
Sorry for the rambling comment, just a truly great write. Take care.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com