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Another piece allowed to fall apart
One torn and given, on riped away
One distroyed by leaving
Another choosing to stay
Piece after piece of a to large heart
Slowly tearing my world apart
A piece for a friend
A piece for a dream
A piece for a nightmare
Tearing sanity at the seems
A heart growing smaller everyday
This fact makes me wonder
Will it soon go away? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 289 [topic] => 43 [informant] => SilentMuse [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Heartless

Contributed by SilentMuse on Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 05:56:59 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Just another piece of a to large heart
Another piece allowed to fall apart
One torn and given, on riped away
One distroyed by leaving
Another choosing to stay
Piece after piece of a to large heart
Slowly tearing my world apart
A piece for a friend
A piece for a dream
A piece for a nightmare
Tearing sanity at the seems
A heart growing smaller everyday
This fact makes me wonder
Will it soon go away?

Copyright © SilentMuse ... [ 2009-12-15 05:56:59]
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Re: Heartless (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 06:23:44 AM AEST
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I think this is very good well written.

Take care

Re: Heartless (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 06:45:33 AM AEST
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I really like your use of words here.
Very well written...
Star x x x

Re: Heartless (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 11:56:25 AM AEST
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There are more peices to a heart then you know, you never run out so long as you don't want to, I think I read this before, it is very good, we'll see if we can mend your heart one day, as for your sanity, if you're insane you hide it well it may lay underneath but I think you're fairly mentally stable
hope to read more soon
-Kelly
(kirby poke) :D

Re: Heartless (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 03:06:35 PM AEST
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It's a wonderul piece,I imagine if it where a
portrait the colors whould spill from the canvas.
This poem is so real it's not enough to just read it
for there is so much more.
It was intoxicating to read, very pleasing.

-D.Truth

Re: Heartless (User Rating: 1 )
by ChaosFactor on Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 06:22:42 PM AEST
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This is very good.. Actually, it's breathtaking.
I'm sorry.

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