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Array ( [sid] => 155903 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Made Me To Break Me [time] => 2009-12-14 00:56:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You took my heart and made it whole...
then u broke me, life and soul...
You loved me more than I deserved...
Then hurt me more than our love occured...
You made me trust you with my life...
Then, you just cut through it with the sharpest knife...
You picked me up when I was down...
Just to lay me flat on the ground...
You saved me from myself so many times...
But you should've saved me from your own fines...
You gave me so many good times and bad...
Now, I'll live forever sad...
You tore my feet out from under me...
You have me unable to get off my knees...
You played with my heart, on its golden platter...
Until you finally let it fall and shatter...
You're the only one who can pick up the mess...
But you won't because you think killing me is best...
You protected me from all the pain...
Just so you could let it rain...
You make me feel like I'm dying inside...
You make me want to run and hide...
You took advantage of loving me...
You knew killing me meant setting me free...
You hurt me more than those you protected me from...
You made my life go numb...
You gave me a family when mine turned their backs...
Then you took it away, hacking through me with an axe...
My life is over without you...
You gave it to me, but now we're through...
You're now the razor you once took from me...
I wish I knew how to set myself free... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 22 [informant] => BabyDollNikki91 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Made Me To Break Me

Contributed by BabyDollNikki91 on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 12:56:20 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You took my heart and made it whole...
then u broke me, life and soul...
You loved me more than I deserved...
Then hurt me more than our love occured...
You made me trust you with my life...
Then, you just cut through it with the sharpest knife...
You picked me up when I was down...
Just to lay me flat on the ground...
You saved me from myself so many times...
But you should've saved me from your own fines...
You gave me so many good times and bad...
Now, I'll live forever sad...
You tore my feet out from under me...
You have me unable to get off my knees...
You played with my heart, on its golden platter...
Until you finally let it fall and shatter...
You're the only one who can pick up the mess...
But you won't because you think killing me is best...
You protected me from all the pain...
Just so you could let it rain...
You make me feel like I'm dying inside...
You make me want to run and hide...
You took advantage of loving me...
You knew killing me meant setting me free...
You hurt me more than those you protected me from...
You made my life go numb...
You gave me a family when mine turned their backs...
Then you took it away, hacking through me with an axe...
My life is over without you...
You gave it to me, but now we're through...
You're now the razor you once took from me...
I wish I knew how to set myself free...




Copyright © BabyDollNikki91 ... [ 2009-12-14 00:56:20]
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Re: Made Me To Break Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 02:03:51 AM AEST
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Brilliant, fantastic write.

Take care


Re: Made Me To Break Me (User Rating: 1 )
by joejoe on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 06:59:55 AM AEST
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we all run into people that hurt us some really bang us good i"v been threw some ***** it sounds like your going threw some now u got to be strong keep writing let it out things get better with time so they say good luck feel free to drop me aline


Re: Made Me To Break Me (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 07:38:30 PM AEST
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Deep Innervision
I feel the emotional torture in this flow
Excellent.




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