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Array ( [sid] => 15589 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => muse [time] => 2003-04-05 09:05:00 [hometext] => this poem is pretty much just talking about the little things that inspire me......love,life,hate,weather and yes even dishes [bodytext] => dish after dish piled on the sink makes me smile now
let it go man we're gonna make it right
those dishes are gonna be alright
smiling back at me makes me sane makes me say

i dont think i can help feeling lost today
loosing grip under circumstance we fight now we lose
around this dirt covered scene our hands always come clean
believing maybe loosing fear, something we might find in some future

a tough forgotten bunch punished for being less than much
an age old wisdom forced from broken shoe laces
same new faces with the art of expressionless taste
a mouth full of meaningful sentiment changes from ur ear to mine [comments] => 6 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 48 [informant] => apartment213 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

muse

Contributed by apartment213 on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

dish after dish piled on the sink makes me smile now
let it go man we're gonna make it right
those dishes are gonna be alright
smiling back at me makes me sane makes me say

i dont think i can help feeling lost today
loosing grip under circumstance we fight now we lose
around this dirt covered scene our hands always come clean
believing maybe loosing fear, something we might find in some future

a tough forgotten bunch punished for being less than much
an age old wisdom forced from broken shoe laces
same new faces with the art of expressionless taste
a mouth full of meaningful sentiment changes from ur ear to mine

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Re: muse (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 02:40:26 PM AEST
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kenny,
your writing is so lovely, i am glad you can find inspiration in all these things
hugs,
kara

Re: muse (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 04:31:24 PM AEST
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i'm tired tonight so i'm takin it easy reading, i just read through all your poems but this is the only comment i'm leaving, i'm too tired to be thinking of things to write, but they're great, i love them, they are intelligent, interesting and thought provoking and i love your style, its very individual and its got its own unique energy but mainly what i want to say is thanks, its been a good read

Re: muse (User Rating: 1 )
by wazarov on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 03:57:17 AM AEST
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keep on writing fallen angel u should be composing up high in the sky for us to hear your lyrics and get high..

Re: muse (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 01:16:35 PM AEST
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kenny, you're brilliant. i admire your ability to write such great poetry, especially when your muse were dishes... :O) if it were only that easy for me. all mine turns out to be BS. loved this one, its is excellent. "an age old wisdom forced from broken shoe laces" FAV line.

Lindsey

Re: muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 02:22:29 AM AEST
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Well what a pleasant change to read something a little more "down to earth" (yet uplifting))

Re: muse (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 06:25:51 AM AEST
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"same new faces with the art of expressionless taste
a mouth full of meaningful sentiment changes from ur ear to mine"

those are my favourite lines, this is definitely one of my favourites of your work. i agree completely with wolfflow - you have a really mature, unique style. i love the grounded yet abstract feel to this write, keep them coming, Kate x

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