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She wore her special gown of white.
Dusted with diamonds of blue.
Strolling along the still pathways
Holding her heart close and tight.

Hushed whispers gathered round her.

She holds the magic deep inside
Afraid to let it shine.
Wishing for the perfect chance
To rise up with the storm.

Dancing in a storm a dream fading softly away.

She felt the breath of wind begin to stir
As it softly blew her hair.
Then the flakes began to dance around
As the world began to dance and swirl.

She faded in with the winter storm, at one with the ice crystal blue.


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~Ice Crystal Blue~

Contributed by shelby on Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 07:24:48 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Photobucket

She wore her special gown of white.
Dusted with diamonds of blue.
Strolling along the still pathways
Holding her heart close and tight.

Hushed whispers gathered round her.

She holds the magic deep inside
Afraid to let it shine.
Wishing for the perfect chance
To rise up with the storm.

Dancing in a storm a dream fading softly away.

She felt the breath of wind begin to stir
As it softly blew her hair.
Then the flakes began to dance around
As the world began to dance and swirl.

She faded in with the winter storm, at one with the ice crystal blue.






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Re: ~Ice Crystal Blue~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 09:39:18 PM AEST
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Beautiful. smiley


Re: ~Ice Crystal Blue~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Anu on Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 01:20:40 AM AEST
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Beautiful Imagination and Picturization.. :)


Re: ~Ice Crystal Blue~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 02:37:30 AM AEST
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Wonderful, beautiful.

Take care


Re: ~Ice Crystal Blue~ (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 07:35:24 AM AEST
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A really lovely write, picture perfect!
Star x x x


Re: ~Ice Crystal Blue~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 01:16:20 PM AEST
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What masterful use of imagery here. I closed my eyes and could see every image in my mind...like a poetic dream my old friend.

Very well done
Roses
Larry


Re: ~Ice Crystal Blue~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 01:27:08 PM AEST
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Very imaginative and beautiful. Great work,
Deidra


Re: ~Ice Crystal Blue~ (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 07:48:39 PM AEST
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This is so good




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