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[sid] => 155871
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[aid] => mick
[title] => My World
[time] => 2009-12-12 13:43:53
[hometext] => I wrote this for a girl I like at around 12 a.m. Give me some opinions... It's also my first poem ever
[bodytext] => ---------------------------------------------------------- Look in to my eyes You'll see your reflection, Within every lie There is a correction. As you look at the world Your mind is in place, View into my mind As it's in outer space. You'll see all the stars With the sun and the moon, You'll see a new planet A moment too soon. The planet is small Just big enough for two, Get closer and closer There's me and there's you. Hold hands in the day And continue till night, But in my one world There is something to fright. The closer we get The farther we drift, Till one day your gone Like a ghost or a myth. But then a bell rings I awake from the fright, Right then i realized It's still only night. I dreamt a whole world Just for me and for you, As I looked at the sky It's color is blue. It made me think of you Your looks and your eyes, As yor favorite color Filled the nighttime sky. I turn to a mirror Felt sad, felt lonely Wishing that you were My one and my only... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 367 [topic] => 2 [informant] => DoubleS [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 43 [ratings] => 9 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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