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for I have enjoyed my last night
May I rest in Peace [bodytext] => So this is it, I've made up my mind
I want out, out of this life
Decided now, that now is the time
To get out, out of this life
Yes this is it, the end of the ride
I can not live, Lord knows I have tried
Can He forgive, the Son of Suicide
And even if, it wouldn't matter I died

So this is it, its really the end
wrists are slit, they are unable to mend
this life I quit, I say goodbye my freind
Yes this is it, this is really the end

Please pray for my soul
Goodbye and godbless
this world was to cruel
In Peace may I rest

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This is it

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

So this is it, I've made up my mind
I want out, out of this life
Decided now, that now is the time
To get out, out of this life
Yes this is it, the end of the ride
I can not live, Lord knows I have tried
Can He forgive, the Son of Suicide
And even if, it wouldn't matter I died

So this is it, its really the end
wrists are slit, they are unable to mend
this life I quit, I say goodbye my freind
Yes this is it, this is really the end

Please pray for my soul
Goodbye and godbless
this world was to cruel
In Peace may I rest

Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2003-04-05 08:05:00]
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Re: This is it (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 08:07:16 AM AEST
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I hope this is fiction!!!

Re: This is it (User Rating: 1 )
by LJ on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 11:10:36 AM AEST
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Echoing the above comment....I too hope this is fiction...

Re: This is it (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 02:18:56 PM AEST
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once again, tell us this is fiction....
x_x_x

Re: This is it (User Rating: 1 )
by kangarose on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 04:37:47 PM AEST
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You know if this isn't fiction then i hope someone did find you in time... and i hope you learn a valuable lesson by surviving just how precious ones life is... many times we all think abut committing suicide because of the rough blows in life we have had... but if we actually take the blow and do it then we never find out also what happiness the rest of our life might have had... nice write all the same

Re: This is it (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 10:31:19 AM AEST
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yikes, i really do hope this isn't your last write - your poetry is excellent, it would be a shame to waste such talent. if you read this, please PM me if you ever want to talk things through or just chat. powerful poem, Kate x

Re: This is it (User Rating: 1 )
by Sandra on Tuesday, 8th April 2003 @ 02:22:28 AM AEST
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this is a amazing write!! I seriously hope that that is all it was. Hold on, things will always turn out ok. Just remember, there are other solutions even though they are hard to see, they are still there. You ever want to talk P.M. me.

Re: This is it (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 04:01:13 PM AEST
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dead or alive, i hope you find peace

Re: This is it (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 11:12:53 PM AEST
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To all of the above and all else I am sad to say that I am still with you praying and hopeing and waiting for my dream to come true one day I will fade away and all just the same I will still be unheard. Thank you all.

Re: This is it (User Rating: 1 )
by stargazer on Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 11:19:12 PM AEST
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Like everyone above... may this be fiction. But if not... maybe God rest in your soul and you find peace within yourself.

Amy

Re: This is it (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 11:39:32 PM AEST
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From the above comment it appears as if I am still here only against my own free will

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