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Silence is deafening, like a blow to the ears
Pain flares, sparks fly behind the eyes

Pink mist wets the face
Everyday life is never the same
Innocence lost, a subconscious twist
Plot thickens, fury persists

Knowledge is nothing to the gullible and weak
Drugs and blood run loose in the streets
The alleys crawl with cats like me

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Pink Mist

Contributed by ToxicityOfTheCity on Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 10:11:45 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Anger singes, darkness falls, white noise ceases.
Silence is deafening, like a blow to the ears
Pain flares, sparks fly behind the eyes

Pink mist wets the face
Everyday life is never the same
Innocence lost, a subconscious twist
Plot thickens, fury persists

Knowledge is nothing to the gullible and weak
Drugs and blood run loose in the streets
The alleys crawl with cats like me

Copyright © ToxicityOfTheCity ... [ 2009-12-10 22:11:45]
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Re: Pink Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 11:08:02 PM AEST
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very effective use of words and imagery can really feel the darkness in this poem esp like the last verse well written

Re: Pink Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Friday, 11th December 2009 @ 07:44:35 AM AEST
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Wonderfully articulated, this is definately
one for the imagination!
great write!
Star x x x

Re: Pink Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 01:27:07 AM AEST
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I am going to mirror the last two comments.

Bravo!!!!!!!!!

Michelle

Re: Pink Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 07:51:21 PM AEST
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ooh vivid and deep

Re: Pink Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by adub1138 on Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 06:21:31 PM AEST
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Its like Crime Fiction/Film Noir poetry. Its not a joke (I know that sometimes people think I'm not serious). Its a good thing. I like that its almost a beg/plead for help and the ultimate surrender to the darkness.

I like this side of you....

Re: Pink Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by Jimmy_Harlequin on Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 03:10:27 PM AEST
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beautiful

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