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That you've fallen in so deep
Without mentioning a word?
That is a secret, hard to keep

Forbidden to be spoken of
Incase it breaks you up
Such a word that seems so little
Yet can mean so very much

I know I mustn't say it
Or it may just run away
But I don't know how to overcome
My feelings on this day

Show me how to say it
In a way that speaks the truth
To spread it's wings upon us
With divine eternal youth
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Falling

Contributed by laststarontheleft on Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 08:17:18 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Ho do you tell a person
That you've fallen in so deep
Without mentioning a word?
That is a secret, hard to keep

Forbidden to be spoken of
Incase it breaks you up
Such a word that seems so little
Yet can mean so very much

I know I mustn't say it
Or it may just run away
But I don't know how to overcome
My feelings on this day

Show me how to say it
In a way that speaks the truth
To spread it's wings upon us
With divine eternal youth

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Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 08:57:40 AM AEST
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lovely poem

Take care.

Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 10:00:12 AM AEST
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shes in lurrrrrrrve!

Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 10:01:23 AM AEST
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Hi,

I'm the last person to give advice on this subject,
but your questions ring a bell or two.

Well versed!

Tommy

Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 09:21:50 PM AEST
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I'm with Tommy. I'm the last person to give advice. So does thatt make him second to last now? big teeth smile

big teeth smile

But yeah, I can certainly relate to these thoughts.

Thanking you for an enjoyable read.

Tim
cool dude

cool dude

Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 09:43:01 AM AEST
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ahh yes, that intriguing subject...
indeed, telling you love someone is like
not knowing whether some explosive will
blow up right in your face or not...
maybe not a good explanation haha,
but it really is hard to tell if u should admit
how you truly feel towards the person.
all i can say is that only YOU will know when
the time is right. It's just one of those things...
Great poem

take care

-K.Z.

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