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Pitch Black heart
Contributed by
DemonQueen
on
Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 08:45:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You shatter the truth and hope to return
The lies will haunt you, in perdition you'll burn
Flickering flames and rising heat
You let out a war cry of mournful defeat
Blind to victory, which lies up ahead
Death holds your life in torment and dread
Trapped in the shadows of pitch black night
A knife through your heart and the end of the line
No light to walk into, but darkened dispair
With aching hearts, and burdens to bear
Copyright ©
DemonQueen
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2009-12-07 08:45:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Pitch Black heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 09:32:54 AM AEST (User
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Very chilling, and forthright.
Nicely executed Demon, I love it!
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Re: Pitch Black heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 06:53:27 AM AEST (User
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What a straight foward and yet
simplistic strenght this piece has,
truly compelling in it's expression
i love the unsuspecting eliment
in the tittle as well . . .
Ben . . . |
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