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Array ( [sid] => 155671 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How its won [time] => 2009-12-06 19:26:37 [hometext] => let me know what you think [bodytext] => Up from the beyond
Down to the ground from the bliss
Brought through these struggles only to huddle amongst the list
To ride through this battle with great haste
We will bring the taste
We will push through
We will hit
We will make
We will shadow all
We will fight through it
We will bring the unspoken hurt
We will conquer the rest of them one by one
Every day till we spill the unique breath upon which all is said to have
This is it for them
They will fall down to the deep
Into the darkness we will make them go
Forcible into the staggered edges
Splitting them as a fallen tree
We will win this for all we’ve got
Everything is on the table
Surely this will not be a fable
Told throughout the large rocks
The cheers so earth shattering
Breaking anyone thinking to go against us
We are the ones
Ones who will tear you up
Only until we have won everything
And everything shall be ours.
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How its won

Contributed by jjayjay25 on Sunday, 6th December 2009 @ 07:26:37 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

Up from the beyond
Down to the ground from the bliss
Brought through these struggles only to huddle amongst the list
To ride through this battle with great haste
We will bring the taste
We will push through
We will hit
We will make
We will shadow all
We will fight through it
We will bring the unspoken hurt
We will conquer the rest of them one by one
Every day till we spill the unique breath upon which all is said to have
This is it for them
They will fall down to the deep
Into the darkness we will make them go
Forcible into the staggered edges
Splitting them as a fallen tree
We will win this for all we’ve got
Everything is on the table
Surely this will not be a fable
Told throughout the large rocks
The cheers so earth shattering
Breaking anyone thinking to go against us
We are the ones
Ones who will tear you up
Only until we have won everything
And everything shall be ours.

Copyright Â© jjayjay25 ... [ 2009-12-06 19:26:37]
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Re: How its won (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 06:44:06 AM AEST
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This is wonderful stuff!!!
Like a raging storm being whipped
away by the power of mother earth's
mighty breath! Great write x
Star x x x

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