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Array ( [sid] => 155603 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => last time romantic [time] => 2009-12-04 10:13:59 [hometext] => please comment all opinions welcome [bodytext] => got you flowers
treated you right
cuddled in bed
night after night

but you change your man
like you change your fake tan
unknown to me i was just
another drop in the sea

your a fake you are plastic
why did you change?
you had your Mr romantic
were you with another man?
just because you know that you can

thought i was the one
thought you were mine two
three years later will i still be missing you

i hope not

because i have alot to offer
you will allways be a bar crawler
when im snuggling up in bed
you will still be off your head

you had the chance when i wanted you back
but you where Mrs party girl
out all weekend
for your cheap thrill

all it takes is a smile and a wink
"back to mines, we can have a drink?"
glass half empty while you leed him to bed
after its finished your wishing you were dead

you wont meet another romantic like me
so why am i left to waiting to see?
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 13 [informant] => pat888 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

last time romantic

Contributed by pat888 on Friday, 4th December 2009 @ 10:13:59 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

got you flowers
treated you right
cuddled in bed
night after night

but you change your man
like you change your fake tan
unknown to me i was just
another drop in the sea

your a fake you are plastic
why did you change?
you had your Mr romantic
were you with another man?
just because you know that you can

thought i was the one
thought you were mine two
three years later will i still be missing you

i hope not

because i have alot to offer
you will allways be a bar crawler
when im snuggling up in bed
you will still be off your head

you had the chance when i wanted you back
but you where Mrs party girl
out all weekend
for your cheap thrill

all it takes is a smile and a wink
"back to mines, we can have a drink?"
glass half empty while you leed him to bed
after its finished your wishing you were dead

you wont meet another romantic like me
so why am i left to waiting to see?

Copyright © pat888 ... [ 2009-12-04 10:13:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: last time romantic (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 4th December 2009 @ 06:30:53 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
Hang tuff.
blessings,
emy

Re: last time romantic (User Rating: 1 )
by blackroses_bleedinghearts on Sunday, 6th December 2009 @ 02:47:07 PM AEST
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i very much liked it.
you'll find someone who will stick with you, though, and then you'll be laughing in her face!

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