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Lose My Grip
Contributed by
Dreamer18
on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 04:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Lose my Grip
I hear your screams and there’s nothing that I can do to help you
I reach out and try to grab a hold of you
But I lose my grip
You cry out one last time and I realize it’s my fault
I couldn’t help you, but I tried
I told you that you could count on me whenever
And the one time that you actually need my help I fail.
You thought that you died alone
But I was there with you the whole time
I was there in your heart, although you didn’t feel me I was there
Now that your gone part of me is dead too.
But I wish that you could be here with me
You died so young and that’s not what I wanted.
I thought that you were happy but you weren’t.
I asked you to let me help you, to let me save you
But you said no, that you didn’t need it
But that day that I reached out to save you
You realized that you did need help but it was already too late.
This scene plays in my head over and over again
And it just wont let me be.
It keeps going like an endless dream…
I hear your screams and there’s nothing that I can do to help you
I reach out and try to grab a hold of you
But again I lose my grip…
Over and over…
By:
Me
Sylvia
XOXO
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Dreamer18
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2003-04-04 16:25:00]
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Re: Lose My Grip
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 04:30:31 PM AEST
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Sad but lovely write.... must have been painful to write..
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Re: Lose My Grip
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by Dreamer18 on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 03:23:19 AM AEST
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Yes, it was very painful to write, but sometimes you really need to get things out and thats just what I did with this. I think that I'm doing a lot better now. I can only wish that she hadn't taken her life.
Love you!
Love me,
~Sylvia~ |
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