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[title] => qYour Mistakeq
[time] => 2003-04-04 14:35:00
[hometext] => please feel free to comment i'd like to hear your thoughts!
[bodytext] => When I was a child I was mean as a snake...every time you look at me I can see what’s in your eyes...you hold no feeling for me only hate...I never done anything to you for you to feel this way...but anything you say to me it always ends in the same way with you telling me that I’m a big mistake...I wish you could see how much pain you cause me for every word you say but you’d only walk away...Why do you see me as the child I once was?...Why can’t you see me for the person I have become?...I can’t ask you these questions because you’d only laugh in my face to add more pain to my heart instead of adding grace...so now I see you look at me with hate in your eyes...no reason for it to be there but it’s no deep surprise because every time you look at me you see this huge mistake...oh how I wish you would see what a toll on me your words take...someday near I hope you see the pain you put on me because when I’m gone you’ll see I held you most dear... Why should I feel for you when you don’t feel for me?...because you are family of which I hold most dear and as I say these words I wish you were here... so now I’ll leave and let you be... know that someday I’d like to be by your side and know that I love you until the day I die.
Sincerely,
Your Mistake
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qYour Mistakeq
Contributed by
Ember
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Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When I was a child I was mean as a snake...every time you look at me I can see what’s in your eyes...you hold no feeling for me only hate...I never done anything to you for you to feel this way...but anything you say to me it always ends in the same way with you telling me that I’m a big mistake...I wish you could see how much pain you cause me for every word you say but you’d only walk away...Why do you see me as the child I once was?...Why can’t you see me for the person I have become?...I can’t ask you these questions because you’d only laugh in my face to add more pain to my heart instead of adding grace...so now I see you look at me with hate in your eyes...no reason for it to be there but it’s no deep surprise because every time you look at me you see this huge mistake...oh how I wish you would see what a toll on me your words take...someday near I hope you see the pain you put on me because when I’m gone you’ll see I held you most dear... Why should I feel for you when you don’t feel for me?...because you are family of which I hold most dear and as I say these words I wish you were here... so now I’ll leave and let you be... know that someday I’d like to be by your side and know that I love you until the day I die.
Sincerely,
Your Mistake
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Ember
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Re: qYour Mistakeq
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 03:35:32 PM AEST
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| great poem - wolfflow |
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Re: qYour Mistakeq
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by Chezzy on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 10:22:21 PM AEST
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Ember, I don't know if you like rap music but that one would make a really choice rap song.
I enjoyed it. My heart goes out to you if it's based on truth
chezzy. |
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Re: qYour Mistakeq
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by Ember on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 12:52:00 AM AEST
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hey thanx for the comment, no i didn't write it based on my life , i just thought of the people that do have it like that. thanx again
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Re: qYour Mistakeq
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by Ember on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 12:53:00 AM AEST
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thanx for the comment it means a lot
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Re: qYour Mistakeq
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by Percursors on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 07:06:17 PM AEST
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| good write... |
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