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Array ( [sid] => 155402 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What Felt Like Nothing [time] => 2009-11-27 00:53:17 [hometext] => ( dont ask ) [bodytext] => The stars fell from the sky tonight
And I was left alone to tend to myself
Dark beyond any hope of site
I walked blindly through what felt like nothing
Searching for hours for any sign of light
But found not even a spark
I screamed out hoping some one might hear
Then I waited for even just an echo
But I was only met by silance
What felt like a tear ran down my face
For the first time I truely felt betrayed
I fell to my knees and gave up any hope
closing my eyes I looked deep into myself
Retracing every scar
I found a million regrets I never let go
And every mistake I made
The blame I shoulder for what I cant control
Opening my eyes the dark seemed so inviting
But even the darkest nights cant last forever
The sun danced around the sky today
And birds sang such a sweet melody
Every answere became so clear to me
Nothing really matters
If we can live content with ourselves [comments] => 2 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 21 [informant] => sorrowsofabrokenheart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

What Felt Like Nothing

Contributed by sorrowsofabrokenheart on Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 12:53:17 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The stars fell from the sky tonight
And I was left alone to tend to myself
Dark beyond any hope of site
I walked blindly through what felt like nothing
Searching for hours for any sign of light
But found not even a spark
I screamed out hoping some one might hear
Then I waited for even just an echo
But I was only met by silance
What felt like a tear ran down my face
For the first time I truely felt betrayed
I fell to my knees and gave up any hope
closing my eyes I looked deep into myself
Retracing every scar
I found a million regrets I never let go
And every mistake I made
The blame I shoulder for what I cant control
Opening my eyes the dark seemed so inviting
But even the darkest nights cant last forever
The sun danced around the sky today
And birds sang such a sweet melody
Every answere became so clear to me
Nothing really matters
If we can live content with ourselves

Copyright © sorrowsofabrokenheart ... [ 2009-11-27 00:53:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: What Felt Like Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Chamaron on Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 01:59:24 PM AEST
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Fantastically cathartic with a wonderful lesson. Thanks for sharing.

Re: What Felt Like Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Sunday, 29th November 2009 @ 09:07:36 PM AEST
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even tho it felt like nothing, what u wrote here is something profound.
i've personally had one of those nights many times, and i conclude every time that i'm all i've got
thank u 4 sharing this

take care

-K.Z.

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