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Array ( [sid] => 155371 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Love of a Brother [time] => 2009-11-26 00:35:27 [hometext] => This Poem is dedicated to my brother that I lost on 6/27/09, he was 20 years old. [bodytext] => Losing you, has hurt a bunch,
Because you meant, so very much.
You were always there, but then you left me all alone,
Everything I know, you have shown.
You made an impact on so many people,
And now you’re at, heavens steeple.
You were the most caring brother,
Almost like, you were my mother.
I think about you every moment, of everyday
Then I have to wipe, the tears away.
Seeing the videos have made me sad,
And with you being gone, has made me oh so mad.
How could you leave, without saying goodbye,
And fly right up, into the big blue sky.
I never got to say I love you one last time,
Therefore I made you this little rhyme.
I will always remember you till I die,
Then I’ll fly up into the big blue sky.
I know that we will be together once again,
Walking in the Kingdom of Men.
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The Love of a Brother

Contributed by dedinsky on Thursday, 26th November 2009 @ 12:35:27 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Losing you, has hurt a bunch,
Because you meant, so very much.
You were always there, but then you left me all alone,
Everything I know, you have shown.
You made an impact on so many people,
And now you’re at, heavens steeple.
You were the most caring brother,
Almost like, you were my mother.
I think about you every moment, of everyday
Then I have to wipe, the tears away.
Seeing the videos have made me sad,
And with you being gone, has made me oh so mad.
How could you leave, without saying goodbye,
And fly right up, into the big blue sky.
I never got to say I love you one last time,
Therefore I made you this little rhyme.
I will always remember you till I die,
Then I’ll fly up into the big blue sky.
I know that we will be together once again,
Walking in the Kingdom of Men.

Copyright Â© dedinsky ... [ 2009-11-26 00:35:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Love of a Brother (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Thursday, 26th November 2009 @ 08:18:03 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem full of love. I am deeply sorry for your loss. Your poem made me cry. Amazing write.

Heidi

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