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scared of tomorrow
yet not enough to end today
pray for the power
wish someone would stay
the lonlyness dwells
in the darkest place
let me be free
to go to the place
where im not alone
but i cant see my face
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fear

Contributed by lostsoul17 on Sunday, 22nd November 2009 @ 02:14:20 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

i am weak
scared of tomorrow
yet not enough to end today
pray for the power
wish someone would stay
the lonlyness dwells
in the darkest place
let me be free
to go to the place
where im not alone
but i cant see my face

Copyright © lostsoul17 ... [ 2009-11-22 14:14:20]
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Re: fear (User Rating: 1 )
by inkmaster on Sunday, 22nd November 2009 @ 05:23:00 PM AEST
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Nice write,
simple but yet a good read ....I liked it..inkmaster

Re: fear (User Rating: 1 )
by one-curly-fry on Sunday, 22nd November 2009 @ 06:33:23 PM AEST
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Summed up really nicely - good punchy lines that round up the depression of isolation.. I can very much relate. I really like the 3rd, 4th and 5th lines - I think they really explain the truth.. it hurts so much, but not in a way that you want to end it - you just want someone there, something real because there is hope.. Sounds like much of my teen years and first half of my 20's.. Now I don't know what I want.
Definately hit a chord with me and it is really well written.

Nice write!

Tim

Re: fear (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 02:18:27 PM AEST
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i can relate to this very much so...

take care

-K.Z.

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