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[title] => How women lose out on dates
[time] => 2003-04-04 06:35:00
[hometext] => Flashy guys come in first...maybe?
[bodytext] => Very, Merry, Terry,
is no guy you want to know.
He's selective and elective
and he makes an awful beau.
He has been with many lassies
who have figured they could win
in that contest known as dating
that folks enter out and in.
Now, I'm nice and I'm polite
and for the ladies, open doors,
But the ladies see me mostly as,
the biggest of the bores.
The ladies on the other hand
see him as cavalier,
These ladies will bring vodka
while Terry brings the beer.
Now, I'm sweet and I'm a pleasure
and I always pay the tab,
and the ladies eat good measure
then..my heart they give a stab.
The ladies on the other hand
see him as debonnaire
They will bring all kinds of money
while Terry brings the air.
Girls, assess the matter
and tell me what you think.
If you're gonna chase a rainbow
you must stand upon the brink.
Would it not be slightly better
that with one you found a link,
he may not shine like sunlight
but he won't vanish in a blink.
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[ratings] => 2
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How women lose out on dates
Contributed by
norm
on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Very, Merry, Terry,
is no guy you want to know.
He's selective and elective
and he makes an awful beau.
He has been with many lassies
who have figured they could win
in that contest known as dating
that folks enter out and in.
Now, I'm nice and I'm polite
and for the ladies, open doors,
But the ladies see me mostly as,
the biggest of the bores.
The ladies on the other hand
see him as cavalier,
These ladies will bring vodka
while Terry brings the beer.
Now, I'm sweet and I'm a pleasure
and I always pay the tab,
and the ladies eat good measure
then..my heart they give a stab.
The ladies on the other hand
see him as debonnaire
They will bring all kinds of money
while Terry brings the air.
Girls, assess the matter
and tell me what you think.
If you're gonna chase a rainbow
you must stand upon the brink.
Would it not be slightly better
that with one you found a link,
he may not shine like sunlight
but he won't vanish in a blink.
Copyright ©
norm
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2003-04-04 06:35:00]
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Re: How women lose out on dates
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by shelby on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 11:08:14 AM AEST
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well done!! I enjoyed reading this. It says alot and
reads nicely. Thanks for sharing.
Michelle |
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Re: How women lose out on dates
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 03:46:26 PM AEST
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Nicely done, pity most women like you say do prefer, Something once something quick, yet wonder why the next day, there is going to be no replay.
Hope you find want you want.
A lafy that is going to love you, for just being you! |
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Re: How women lose out on dates
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 03:50:10 PM AEST
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Oops sorry norm, the last line I put (lafy) when it was ment to be (lady).
Sometimes my spelling does sux a little.
Sorry about that.
Keep up the excellent writting. |
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Re: How women lose out on dates
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 05:12:43 PM AEST
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Interesting write, Norm...and so true in many cases... Good luck..
Jenni |
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Re: How women lose out on dates
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 05:19:45 PM AEST
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this is sweet, im not one for your very merry terry man though lmao, im not even a drinker:P, i like when men open doors for me too, it's very nice and your poem is nice too, i want the one who will know my heart and stay with me, sorry im not signed in,
hugs nessa
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Re: How women lose out on dates
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by wolfflow on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 05:18:16 PM AEST
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| hmm interesting, anyone who treats relationships as a game is always going to be a loser, you want to avoid those types like the plague norm |
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Re: How women lose out on dates
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by norm on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 02:08:47 PM AEST
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the truth be known. poetry is an imaginatory
animal which need have nothing to do with
the poet. i write like aesop wrote. he didn't
know a fox who found sour grapes.
sorry, old dear, i'm more like terry than
i wish to admit...a bounder type...
let the buyer beware. |
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Re: How women lose out on dates
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by tinka_belle on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 12:30:18 AM AEST
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so sweet
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Re: How women lose out on dates
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 03:10:39 AM AEST
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Ah problem, this is No 8 (not the last one) oh the stress the stress...............
This is really a great write ( no carping criticism here) mind you as my Grandma used to say (and she had a saying for everything)
"There's non so deaf as those who don't wish to hear."
For technique and skill this is your best so far. One can't draw comparisons on content because they are all so different and equally good in their own way |
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