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When I leave, there will not remain a trace
No words, no sounds, just the memory of my face
When I am gone, a few tears I know will fall
Though not enough to wash the memory wall

When I leave, the world will be the same
Soon after, they will not even know my name
When I am gone, your eyes will return to clear and bright
The clouded sadness will fade so you can see the light

When I leave, there will be no time for good-byes
No time to release the feelings kept in disguise
When I am gone, I will watch from Heaven above
I will forever hold in my heart, your love

Deadwriter
11/20/2009

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When I Leave

Contributed by deadwriter on Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 05:28:26 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

When I Leave

When I leave, there will not remain a trace
No words, no sounds, just the memory of my face
When I am gone, a few tears I know will fall
Though not enough to wash the memory wall

When I leave, the world will be the same
Soon after, they will not even know my name
When I am gone, your eyes will return to clear and bright
The clouded sadness will fade so you can see the light

When I leave, there will be no time for good-byes
No time to release the feelings kept in disguise
When I am gone, I will watch from Heaven above
I will forever hold in my heart, your love

Deadwriter
11/20/2009

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Re: When I Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 06:27:35 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem. I know no tears shall be shed at all when I go

Re: When I Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 06:46:31 PM AEST
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There will be tears from my eyes when it is your time to go my friend.

Re: When I Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 10:01:02 PM AEST
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Good writing.
I*'m sure more tears will be shed than you think.
Great work.
smiles, blessings,
emy

Re: When I Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd November 2009 @ 07:10:53 AM AEST
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I don't think any of us really know the amount of tears that will fall when we go....thanks for sharing.

Re: When I Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 03:36:33 PM AEST
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beautifully expressed, softly written,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: When I Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 25th November 2009 @ 12:16:14 PM AEST
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Sigh.... Such a beautiful but sad poem. I'm positive that you will be missed greatly..but we won't focus on that...focus on the here and now... Lovely write...
Hugs
Jenni

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