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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Brandie, To Me, You Are Love!!!
[time] => 2003-04-04 00:45:00
[hometext] => This poem is/was writer to a girl I met recently and long to fall further into. I found her most captivating and definitely worthy of my time and attention, and she seem to find me the same. Anyway, I gave her my number, for, she wanted to take some time to get to know me, on a better, more deeper level, before she gave me hers. Before we parted ways after first meeting, I said I'd would write her a poem, and as I siting here, waiting for her call and hoping, indeed, that she does call, I composed her this poem. If you please, tell me what you think of it, if it's good, and if you think it'll have a positive effect, if she'll like it!!!
[bodytext] => Brandie, to me, you are love,
You’re a heavenly creature sent from up above. Most beautiful creature, you so have captured me. I want to know your soul and get wrapped in your ecstasy. My every moment cries out for a moment, with you. I long to lose myself, in your heavenly hue, To know the deepness of your soul. By you and your wonder I am, taken, whole. Brandie, to me, you are love, Everything I could want a woman to be. Me, you just take hold of, Leaving me in jubilee, As, sweetly, you play to my soul. In the mists of your presence, I am, extolled, And taking to a place, so wonderful. Although our moments, were fleeting, they were, magical, And I look forward to more. The waves of my soul, long to rest, at your shore. Brandie, to me, you are love, Perhaps, more wonderful, than anything I’ve known. Your wonder, I’m left, in awe of. I’m taking hold by it, just like a cyclone. You leave me, utterly, enthralled. Like a beautiful siren, by you, I’m called. Yours is a most beautiful song. With every bit of my soul, to you, I’m drawn… You are so Beautiful!!! To Brandie, in hopes of many wonderful moments together, as we fall into one another and our soul melt into each other’s… Here’s to a wonderful friendship and all the wonders that lie ahead!!! Robert Gardiner R.G.Love [comments] => 3 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 2 [informant] => r.g.love [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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