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Array ( [sid] => 155162 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Truthsome [time] => 2009-11-19 16:35:10 [hometext] => A poem about the deeper feelings and emotions I feel about loving this, special person. [bodytext] => Forming words with pen and ink
That force a restless mind to think
To analyze their true emotion
Brave the void vast as an ocean
As vibrant as the sun’s last set
The constant drowning in regret
Having slept but not to take
A restless dream dreamt not to wake
Wander aimless through the storm
Until a place that’s calm and warm
My guess confirmed, that’s where you’ll be
Sadness force me to my knees
Take the tears and leave the stinging
Enduring cries that keep on ringing
Too soon to end a constant bleeding
A life shuts down, the heart stops beating
Vanishing, you start to shimmer
Forgetful hope, left fate much grimmer
Found within myself, a past,
Of lost emotions kept to last
Forcing peace, an iron will
Finding loss, to suffer still
From my heart, present a gift
Left through sands of time to sift
Precious more than gold or feeling
True emotion, now not concealing
Refuge found, between your arms
Locked in safety, come no harm
Perfect fit, sweet like a dove
Forever with, my one true love…..
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Truthsome

Contributed by Redmurcury on Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 04:35:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Forming words with pen and ink
That force a restless mind to think
To analyze their true emotion
Brave the void vast as an ocean
As vibrant as the sun’s last set
The constant drowning in regret
Having slept but not to take
A restless dream dreamt not to wake
Wander aimless through the storm
Until a place that’s calm and warm
My guess confirmed, that’s where you’ll be
Sadness force me to my knees
Take the tears and leave the stinging
Enduring cries that keep on ringing
Too soon to end a constant bleeding
A life shuts down, the heart stops beating
Vanishing, you start to shimmer
Forgetful hope, left fate much grimmer
Found within myself, a past,
Of lost emotions kept to last
Forcing peace, an iron will
Finding loss, to suffer still
From my heart, present a gift
Left through sands of time to sift
Precious more than gold or feeling
True emotion, now not concealing
Refuge found, between your arms
Locked in safety, come no harm
Perfect fit, sweet like a dove
Forever with, my one true love…..




Copyright © Redmurcury ... [ 2009-11-19 16:35:10]
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Re: Truthsome (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 05:40:31 PM AEST
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this is awsome, it took me from the pain and stuggle to finding love again, it gives hope to those like me.
sp


Re: Truthsome (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 01:15:43 AM AEST
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This is categorically,a genuine cast of emotion
Love is an amazing,stimulant which can inspire so deeply
In this case your very well articulated confession is the product of sed derived form
Simply Astonishing

-D.Truth


Re: Truthsome (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Wednesday, 6th January 2010 @ 01:28:30 PM AEST
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This is very beautiful....
I'm rarely speechless (!) but your words have rendered me so right now!... i WILL come back to read again!!
I really, really like this piece x
Star x x x




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