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Array ( [sid] => 155145 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => untill i met you [time] => 2009-11-19 07:50:49 [hometext] => {Plz tell me all good or bad what do you think} [bodytext] =>


my mama always told me when i was young
that youll have to kiss alot of toads before you find the one
but i never believed her untill i met you
that day was the day when fairtales came true
i remember
i was scrubbing floors and i was feeling down
tired of waiting for prince charming to come around
and then i saw you

up over there riding up on your white horse
looking down on me telling me not to feel any remorse
and there you were with a slipper in hand
telling me that you knew that you were my man

u see i was just a lost girl with a lost shoe
who woulda new all along it was with you
i was just a lost girl i never new
i never believed in fairytales before i met you

and who woulda guessed that the slipper did fit
and that all along you were mr perfect
who woulda guessed who woulda new that fairy tales do come true

and you say ohh come on baby come on lets go
i have something for you i want to show
come on baby you have to know
over there a pumpkin into a carrage is gonna grow

and i look up at you so handsome and tall
further in love with u im afraid to fall
and you say come baby you better believe it all
because baby this cinderella is going to the ball

i was just a lost girl with a lost shoe
untill you came to my rescue
i feel so good inside i feel so brand new
i feel just like a princess when i am with you

but still i m scared im almost afraid to believe
because fairytales dont happen to mee
and you say ohh baby come on baby come on
i have been your prince all along
this is our love story this is our love song
and in this is our fairy tale where we belong
but i say scrubbing these floors is all ive ever known
and u say come on baby they can do it on there own
i am your prince now i will not leave you alone
i have a castel and i am ready to take you home

ohh i was just a lost girl with a lost shoe
who woulda known all along it was with you
i was just a lost girl i never new
i never believed in fairy tales before i met youu....
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untill i met you

Contributed by mandipandi on Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 07:50:49 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy






my mama always told me when i was young
that youll have to kiss alot of toads before you find the one
but i never believed her untill i met you
that day was the day when fairtales came true
i remember
i was scrubbing floors and i was feeling down
tired of waiting for prince charming to come around
and then i saw you

up over there riding up on your white horse
looking down on me telling me not to feel any remorse
and there you were with a slipper in hand
telling me that you knew that you were my man

u see i was just a lost girl with a lost shoe
who woulda new all along it was with you
i was just a lost girl i never new
i never believed in fairytales before i met you

and who woulda guessed that the slipper did fit
and that all along you were mr perfect
who woulda guessed who woulda new that fairy tales do come true

and you say ohh come on baby come on lets go
i have something for you i want to show
come on baby you have to know
over there a pumpkin into a carrage is gonna grow

and i look up at you so handsome and tall
further in love with u im afraid to fall
and you say come baby you better believe it all
because baby this cinderella is going to the ball

i was just a lost girl with a lost shoe
untill you came to my rescue
i feel so good inside i feel so brand new
i feel just like a princess when i am with you

but still i m scared im almost afraid to believe
because fairytales dont happen to mee
and you say ohh baby come on baby come on
i have been your prince all along
this is our love story this is our love song
and in this is our fairy tale where we belong
but i say scrubbing these floors is all ive ever known
and u say come on baby they can do it on there own
i am your prince now i will not leave you alone
i have a castel and i am ready to take you home

ohh i was just a lost girl with a lost shoe
who woulda known all along it was with you
i was just a lost girl i never new
i never believed in fairy tales before i met youu....




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Re: untill i met you (User Rating: 1 )
by mandipandi on Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 08:41:15 AM AEST
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i am trying to improve my writting so plz tell me how this could be better or how i can improve


Re: untill i met you (User Rating: 1 )
by simon30 on Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 02:51:16 PM AEST
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I think its a great read. I got a little lost as it was too long, and sometimes repetative at the wrong stages.
But I am not a proof reader just an honest opinion, but a great story of a girl who has forefilled every girls dream, I hope it was a reality for you.


Re: untill i met you (User Rating: 1 )
by corpsman2000 on Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 02:20:40 PM AEST
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Most poems are short but this one is alot longer and it still kept my attention and i liked it alot. Good job!!!




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