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A fool in love...
Contributed by
Meghanforever
on
Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 03:09:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The rain is falling,
and i hear your calling.
Screaming my name,
but i never came.
wanting to run from my fears,
wanting to hide my gushing tears.
you ran to me and asked me why,
i looked away being shy.
my heart was silver, and yours was gold,
i was seeing our love about to unfold.
you took my hand and held it tight,
then i knew you didnt want to fight.
it was like some strange magnetic pull,
i promised myself i wouldnt be a fool.
we were soaking wet,
then our eyes met.
the words that came next,
could not be said in a text.
i love you and i always will,
those words were like an amazing thrill.
Copyright ©
Meghanforever
... [
2009-11-17 15:09:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A fool in love...
(User Rating: 1 ) by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 03:32:05 PM AEST (User
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Meghan, this is fantastic writing!
The fact that - in my interpretation - that you were so unconfident of yourself in
the beginning, and then let your heart
have a chance is wonderful in this piece!
Well done! I love it! Luv Star x x x |
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