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Array ( [sid] => 155062 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Away [time] => 2009-11-16 03:34:55 [hometext] => Let the bonds of pasts be broken so that those clinging to us in desperate hope can have their hands emptied to receive what they deserve. [bodytext] => This ticking time spent waiting on you
makes of me a crumbling harlequin.
Visions of futures are now but a grey blur
as i transcend the moments of you.
A bag of "I love you's" pacing in the past
are the only constants tearing me aptly.

Now i see through you
and all things promised.

How long can love be kept on to survive
by the steel pressed promises of hope?
All roses wilt and descend indefinitely
without eyes to keep it standing strong.
Convincing myself this is not different
is the weight of your absent heart crushing me.

In this world two is such a fragile number
answering easily to raining calls of sorrow.
I have taken the hand of self deceit before
and paid myself transparent.
Dare you expect of me to drink this in
to prove that you indeed exist?

Cutting myself is the only cure
to watch you fall away.

Please...

-Svw [comments] => 1 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 44 [informant] => Clayman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Nostalgic )

Away

Contributed by Clayman on Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 03:34:55 AM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic

This ticking time spent waiting on you
makes of me a crumbling harlequin.
Visions of futures are now but a grey blur
as i transcend the moments of you.
A bag of "I love you's" pacing in the past
are the only constants tearing me aptly.

Now i see through you
and all things promised.

How long can love be kept on to survive
by the steel pressed promises of hope?
All roses wilt and descend indefinitely
without eyes to keep it standing strong.
Convincing myself this is not different
is the weight of your absent heart crushing me.

In this world two is such a fragile number
answering easily to raining calls of sorrow.
I have taken the hand of self deceit before
and paid myself transparent.
Dare you expect of me to drink this in
to prove that you indeed exist?

Cutting myself is the only cure
to watch you fall away.

Please...

-Svw

Copyright © Clayman ... [ 2009-11-16 03:34:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Away (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 09:30:54 AM AEST
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wow awsome writing you pulled it up from within and let it sing I loved it
sp

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