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Array ( [sid] => 155051 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Woman In The Window [time] => 2009-11-15 14:37:23 [hometext] => I know it has been a while since I have posted but I have been thru some rough times. This poem reflects me current state of mind. [bodytext] => The room surrounded by darkness
A shivering cold wandering
The skin icey blue
And the eyes so empty
Open mouth, dried lips
Muffled sounds from the world around
Brain in a slowmotion

Who is this woman staring at me
From the window inside
A frail look, hair a mess
She looks so old but yet so young
Fragile hand touching the skin
I feel her hand on mine
Her eyes with such a sadness
I feel her pain deep within me

I take a closer look
At the woman in the window
I recognise her eyes,
The shape of her face
Could this really be?
Confused and sad
I look back at the woman
As tho she is a ghost

She shows me the movie
Of the past, the present and the future
The movie of this woman shocks me
Those images shown, portraits a memory
As I look again I see the reflection
I'm staring into the window,
I am her, she is me, I am,

The woman in the window


~~ Nats ~~ [comments] => 3 [counter] => 272 [topic] => 48 [informant] => xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
The Woman In The Window

Contributed by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 02:37:23 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



The room surrounded by darkness
A shivering cold wandering
The skin icey blue
And the eyes so empty
Open mouth, dried lips
Muffled sounds from the world around
Brain in a slowmotion

Who is this woman staring at me
From the window inside
A frail look, hair a mess
She looks so old but yet so young
Fragile hand touching the skin
I feel her hand on mine
Her eyes with such a sadness
I feel her pain deep within me

I take a closer look
At the woman in the window
I recognise her eyes,
The shape of her face
Could this really be?
Confused and sad
I look back at the woman
As tho she is a ghost

She shows me the movie
Of the past, the present and the future
The movie of this woman shocks me
Those images shown, portraits a memory
As I look again I see the reflection
I'm staring into the window,
I am her, she is me, I am,

The woman in the window


~~ Nats ~~




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Re: The Woman In The Window (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 09:24:30 PM AEST
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hug guy


Re: The Woman In The Window (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 04:40:56 PM AEST
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Wow Nats, you really have me speechless with this one (so a good job that I'm allowed to type a response).
I think this is possibly the best you have ever done, it is certainly powerful and intense stuff.
Fantastic.

Steve


Re: The Woman In The Window (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Saturday, 30th January 2010 @ 02:12:29 PM AEST
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Such a well written poem.

Take care
Fuzzy




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