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Array ( [sid] => 155035 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Have Endured [time] => 2009-11-15 01:58:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => What then
Have you come back with
With all of your journeys
Into the Darkness

That you think
somehow hold the Key
To all of the
Suffering, which

You have endured

What then
Can you now tell me
That you didn't know
before
Beside the fact that

You have endured

What then
Is now so different
Since you've gone
And dug your way
Back to the rest of us
Except that

You have endured

What then
Makes you dive back in
Keeps you perpetuating
The state of stasis
That keeps you paralyzed
Exploration that eats you alive
Which

You have endured

What then
Do you live for
When all of your Life is
Spent pondering what

You have endured

How much longer
Are we supposed to endure
All of the things

You have endured [comments] => 3 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 43 [informant] => xnoybis [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

You Have Endured

Contributed by xnoybis on Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 01:58:49 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

What then
Have you come back with
With all of your journeys
Into the Darkness

That you think
somehow hold the Key
To all of the
Suffering, which

You have endured

What then
Can you now tell me
That you didn't know
before
Beside the fact that

You have endured

What then
Is now so different
Since you've gone
And dug your way
Back to the rest of us
Except that

You have endured

What then
Makes you dive back in
Keeps you perpetuating
The state of stasis
That keeps you paralyzed
Exploration that eats you alive
Which

You have endured

What then
Do you live for
When all of your Life is
Spent pondering what

You have endured

How much longer
Are we supposed to endure
All of the things

You have endured

Copyright © xnoybis ... [ 2009-11-15 01:58:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You Have Endured (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 02:05:46 AM AEST
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This is very good! Builds up to a perfect question...

What then
Do you live for
When all of your Life is
Spent pondering what

You have endured

How much longer
Are we supposed to endure
All of the things

You have endured

ming

Re: You Have Endured (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 02:31:39 AM AEST
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yes this is very good.
Take care

Re: You Have Endured (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 03:54:52 AM AEST
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Oh my gosh! This really speaks to me!
It's almost creepy the way I've interpreted
it to fit a situation I once had with someone.
Fab writing. I want more!!!
Last Star x x x

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