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Array ( [sid] => 154968 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => jealous end [time] => 2009-11-12 17:24:11 [hometext] => Idn lol.. [bodytext] => Tick tock tick tock I stare at the clock
Hour after hour sitting in the dark
You loved me from the start
Until my jealousy ripped us apart
If I had controlled myself
Would we still remain

Every time it rains
I'm reminded of the pain
How I'd given someone so much power over me
Is it cuz she seemed so into me
Tho it always felt I was right
I no longer bothered to put up a fight
You told me you loved me and weren't seeing new people
Even tho you were at home playing with your facebook singles

Now almost out of sight
All i spot is a glare of light
I get on my knee's ,open my mouth and put the gun in between
I pull the trigger squeeze,squeeze,squeeze
Is this really the end, do i want it to be?
Someone help please,please,please [comments] => 1 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 22 [informant] => nyce [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

jealous end

Contributed by nyce on Thursday, 12th November 2009 @ 05:24:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Tick tock tick tock I stare at the clock
Hour after hour sitting in the dark
You loved me from the start
Until my jealousy ripped us apart
If I had controlled myself
Would we still remain

Every time it rains
I'm reminded of the pain
How I'd given someone so much power over me
Is it cuz she seemed so into me
Tho it always felt I was right
I no longer bothered to put up a fight
You told me you loved me and weren't seeing new people
Even tho you were at home playing with your facebook singles

Now almost out of sight
All i spot is a glare of light
I get on my knee's ,open my mouth and put the gun in between
I pull the trigger squeeze,squeeze,squeeze
Is this really the end, do i want it to be?
Someone help please,please,please

Copyright © nyce ... [ 2009-11-12 17:24:11]
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Re: jealous end (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 12th November 2009 @ 05:35:31 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
You may think you wonna die but give it some time.
Life is worth living.
I'm sure you can find something to be thankfull for.
Time heals.
Huggs, blessings, prayer,
emy

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