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Array ( [sid] => 154967 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Some things i might miss..... [time] => 2009-11-12 17:10:15 [hometext] => My boyfriend and i just broke up, spent a while on the phone to a close friend, he read me a poem he wrote wich inspired me, this is the first poem i have written. [bodytext] =>


The way we could express ourselves and not feel ashamed,
They way we would start a fight, flirt allnight and noone would take the blame,
The way we could show ourselves, and with a little smile neither of us would have any shame,
The way we cuddled, and believed one day maybe i would carry on your name,
I was yours, you were mine how could i ever complain?
Everyone around me told me otherwise, to leave and that i must be insane,
" you deserve better, hes ugly, oh baby hes just another player, or yet hes just so lame "
But i followed my heart, and still you lead me astray,
So you loved me at my best, well so thats what you said,
Well guess what baby, you never seen me at my best,
The possability of a kid, boy did i ever see you run so far?
Before it happened thats what you wanted, i guess your just a liar,
You could light my heart up, set it on fire,
Once upon a time baby you were my only desire,
Its only now i realize,

Ive looked at you so often,
I hardly see you,
You are more a feeling than a face,
A feeling of what you mean to me,
What you share with me,
What you do for me,
But i must remember you have your own face,
And are your own person,
All the gentleness, respect and sense of wonder i owe too you,
but now i believe its,
safe to say,
Im better off without you.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 22 [informant] => biancalea92 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Some things i might miss.....

Contributed by biancalea92 on Thursday, 12th November 2009 @ 05:10:15 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove





The way we could express ourselves and not feel ashamed,
They way we would start a fight, flirt allnight and noone would take the blame,
The way we could show ourselves, and with a little smile neither of us would have any shame,
The way we cuddled, and believed one day maybe i would carry on your name,
I was yours, you were mine how could i ever complain?
Everyone around me told me otherwise, to leave and that i must be insane,
" you deserve better, hes ugly, oh baby hes just another player, or yet hes just so lame "
But i followed my heart, and still you lead me astray,
So you loved me at my best, well so thats what you said,
Well guess what baby, you never seen me at my best,
The possability of a kid, boy did i ever see you run so far?
Before it happened thats what you wanted, i guess your just a liar,
You could light my heart up, set it on fire,
Once upon a time baby you were my only desire,
Its only now i realize,

Ive looked at you so often,
I hardly see you,
You are more a feeling than a face,
A feeling of what you mean to me,
What you share with me,
What you do for me,
But i must remember you have your own face,
And are your own person,
All the gentleness, respect and sense of wonder i owe too you,
but now i believe its,
safe to say,
Im better off without you.




Copyright © biancalea92 ... [ 2009-11-12 17:10:15]
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Re: Some things i might miss..... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 12th November 2009 @ 05:24:26 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC
Great writing.
Awesome work.
Hugg, blessings,
emy


Re: Some things i might miss..... (User Rating: 1 )
by nyce on Thursday, 12th November 2009 @ 05:47:24 PM AEST
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wooo thats some good ***** there..
you got some skillz kid


Re: Some things i might miss..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Thursday, 12th November 2009 @ 06:52:30 PM AEST
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such a complication of emotion, that's the beauty of poetry. great write

take care

-K.Z.




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