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Array ( [sid] => 154960 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can they not see [time] => 2009-11-12 11:06:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Running round my mind never stops
mind forever turning like a clock
thoughts fears life you me who i was
trying to make sense this confusion
it haunts me day night dreams life
what have they done to me can you see

So who am i now this man this being
scared tired of all the trying
see my reflection want to hide
just run and find a place of peace
what have they done to me you must see

Feel anger rage say look just look
but know its no good to try do they listen
this is not who i am not who i was not me
do they even care they just stare
what have they done to me can they not see [comments] => 2 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Fuzzy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Can they not see

Contributed by Fuzzy on Thursday, 12th November 2009 @ 11:06:03 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Running round my mind never stops
mind forever turning like a clock
thoughts fears life you me who i was
trying to make sense this confusion
it haunts me day night dreams life
what have they done to me can you see

So who am i now this man this being
scared tired of all the trying
see my reflection want to hide
just run and find a place of peace
what have they done to me you must see

Feel anger rage say look just look
but know its no good to try do they listen
this is not who i am not who i was not me
do they even care they just stare
what have they done to me can they not see

Copyright © Fuzzy ... [ 2009-11-12 11:06:03]
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Re: Can they not see (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 04:22:13 AM AEST
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I love this, your voice just screaming out
to be heard, to be noticed. Very strong,
Take care luv last star x x x

Re: Can they not see (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 01:54:14 PM AEST
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I feel you, baby people can be so blind of another,
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