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GOD
Contributed by
inkmaster
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Tuesday, 10th November 2009 @ 07:38:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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God where are you
have you forgotten all of us,
There was a time long ago
when you use to care,
Though I walk the valley
of the shadow of death
I know longer care ,
because the valley is blanketed
With agony and despair,
So do you hear the cries
of the innocent without sin,
I think you need to turn up
your hearing aids again,
Many here have lost there faith
and lost there way,
So hear me know
because I am lost again,
I have looked for you
in many places but it seems
That I am no longer in your graces
alone to make my way
in this most unholy of places ,
lost and I can not
Find my way home….
Inkmaster (C) 2009
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inkmaster
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2009-11-10 19:38:31]
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Re: GOD
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 10th November 2009 @ 10:33:17 PM AEST
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I know it's hard some times but that's what faith is, (blind trust).
Some times I get angry 'cause things don't go the way I think they should but in time God answers in his way.
It's true his ways are mysterious.
Hang tuff friend as joy cometh in the morning.
Huggs, blessings, Prayer,
emy |
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Re: GOD
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by Xnoybis on
Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 07:02:50 AM AEST
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While some of the miswording really took me out of it, I have to admit, the stanza:
"So do you hear the cries
of the innocent without sin,
I think you need to turn up
your hearing aids again"
...really cracked me up. Thanks! |
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