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ache
Contributed by
ming
on
Monday, 9th November 2009 @ 07:54:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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candles weeping
too late
my obscure room
my moat widens
endless night sky
clearly reveals
the trance of self
an occupation
pretends death
like night always
back black to night
naked moon
overhead
listening to(o)
my words
unmoved
tired of my dark
I erase
renounce
end
but
to late
the page
ink dark.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-11-09 19:54:26]
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Re: ache
(User Rating: 1 )
by elle on
Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 08:11:51 PM AEST
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| Your words embrace, collide & so mirror the sensation of the well placed title. Nicely done. elle :) |
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