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Array ( [sid] => 15484 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Challenger Deep [time] => 2003-04-02 23:25:00 [hometext] => A christian song about my idea of paradise. [bodytext] => Jesus came to me this morning,
Took me in his arms,
Left my body limp and floating
In a sea of charms.

He dropped me in the ocean
Where the angel fish all flew
And set me up some gills
And showed me what to do.

I played in worlds so alien
That pleasure knew no bounds.
I swam throughout the universe,
And finally settled down.

I live here in the glowing light
Of some newly born star,
And know that god is watching me
And never goes that far.

He’s put me in a paradise
Where warmth swallowed me whole
And left me in a dream-like state
With warmth throughout my soul.

I know now this is heaven
And I know that this won’t end.
And if you want what I have,
Then please make him your friend.

For I have told you everything
You’ll ever need to know.
Just follow now the sacred word,
And your dreams will be so. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Butterat_Zool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Challenger Deep

Contributed by Butterat_Zool on Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Jesus came to me this morning,
Took me in his arms,
Left my body limp and floating
In a sea of charms.

He dropped me in the ocean
Where the angel fish all flew
And set me up some gills
And showed me what to do.

I played in worlds so alien
That pleasure knew no bounds.
I swam throughout the universe,
And finally settled down.

I live here in the glowing light
Of some newly born star,
And know that god is watching me
And never goes that far.

He’s put me in a paradise
Where warmth swallowed me whole
And left me in a dream-like state
With warmth throughout my soul.

I know now this is heaven
And I know that this won’t end.
And if you want what I have,
Then please make him your friend.

For I have told you everything
You’ll ever need to know.
Just follow now the sacred word,
And your dreams will be so.

Copyright Â© Butterat_Zool ... [ 2003-04-02 23:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Challenger Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by Crys on Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 01:56:48 AM AEST
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Beautifully written. Honestly, I am Wiccan but I am not ignorant to others beliefs. I respect you and where your faith is... in Him. I think your poem is very inspiring to those who cannot find their spiritual path, and coming from a Wiccan, that's one hell of a compliment... Great write!

*~*Crys*~*

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