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yes I could have hurled you out, but I loved you both from the very start,
and yes you had another brother that died invitro, and I also love him so,
Ive lived most of your lives praying that one day I would have you back again,
that day time I still dont win, I keep your pictures on my wall with still hope in my heart,
being perfect in your eyes I will never be, doing the things you thought I should have done, I didnt,
I wasnt anything that you wanted me to be, I LOVE YOU"S its all Im able to do,
God knows my love for you, It comes from deep down in my heart, a place that only is for you,
I wish I could have changed the way things turned out, I cant take back the past,
I just keep praying that some day soon, before my mind gets to feeble to remember you,
or my eyes loose sight. Maybe a post card or a phone call, to let me know your alright,
myspace or facebook theres so many places to find me.
Well Im sure you wont read this like the letters I writen not a word was said,
I just want to say I LOVE YOU BOTH and if not in this life, I will be still waiting for you,
at heavens Gates.
mom
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Daughter and Son

Contributed by longhaircg on Friday, 6th November 2009 @ 02:15:23 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I know you never ask me to bring you into this world,
yes I could have hurled you out, but I loved you both from the very start,
and yes you had another brother that died invitro, and I also love him so,
Ive lived most of your lives praying that one day I would have you back again,
that day time I still dont win, I keep your pictures on my wall with still hope in my heart,
being perfect in your eyes I will never be, doing the things you thought I should have done, I didnt,
I wasnt anything that you wanted me to be, I LOVE YOU"S its all Im able to do,
God knows my love for you, It comes from deep down in my heart, a place that only is for you,
I wish I could have changed the way things turned out, I cant take back the past,
I just keep praying that some day soon, before my mind gets to feeble to remember you,
or my eyes loose sight. Maybe a post card or a phone call, to let me know your alright,
myspace or facebook theres so many places to find me.
Well Im sure you wont read this like the letters I writen not a word was said,
I just want to say I LOVE YOU BOTH and if not in this life, I will be still waiting for you,
at heavens Gates.
mom




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Re: Daughter and Son (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 6th November 2009 @ 03:50:37 PM AEST
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This is quite a tear-jerker.... I'm sorry you have to go through this...
Jenni


Re: Daughter and Son (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 07:29:44 AM AEST
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The pain you have bared on your sleeve here is so immense.
A beautiful piece even in its great sadness x
Best wishes
Star x x x




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