Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 17:36:50 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 154749 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => hurt [time] => 2009-11-05 08:01:41 [hometext] => just a little poem about a friend who hurt me awhile ago. [bodytext] => you said we're friends
i guess that all depends.
a real friend wouldn't hurt me like you did
and i have to keep it all hid
when i see you, you just grin
and all the flashbacks begin
i hated the feeling of your cold skin
the way you touched me
is discusting
i hate you and your sick pleasure
while i lay there and shiver
you have messed me up for life
threatening me with your pocket knife
if i could go back
id rather you kill me
then i wouldn't have this memory. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 13 [informant] => samii [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

hurt

Contributed by samii on Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 08:01:41 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

you said we're friends
i guess that all depends.
a real friend wouldn't hurt me like you did
and i have to keep it all hid
when i see you, you just grin
and all the flashbacks begin
i hated the feeling of your cold skin
the way you touched me
is discusting
i hate you and your sick pleasure
while i lay there and shiver
you have messed me up for life
threatening me with your pocket knife
if i could go back
id rather you kill me
then i wouldn't have this memory.

Copyright © samii ... [ 2009-11-05 08:01:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 11:42:26 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Samii,
I just finished reading your poem about your dad, now I see this one. This is very disturbing to me. Have you told anyone about this and what happened? If not I think that you should. I am sad to see all the pain that has been inflicted upon you. Do not suffer in silence, please please go to someone for help.

Michelle

Re: hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 03:41:34 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

portrayed here is betrayal, ire, and injustice. i know exactly what you've expressed here, lot of us have been there, i know i have. but payback isn't worth it, it makes u no better. just try to let it go...

take care

-K.Z.

Re: hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Friday, 6th November 2009 @ 07:41:39 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Hi,

I've just read your 'daddy dearest' and now this
one. You're pouring out your sadness and
misery. You need to talk with someone external
of those who are making your life difficult. You
do NOT have to take all of this and feel deserving
of it in any way! You DON'T deserve it!

I'm guessing you're female - so go sweetheart, and
talk with someone who can help!

God go with you!

Tommy

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com