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Array ( [sid] => 15472 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Dear Allan.... [time] => 2003-04-02 20:05:00 [hometext] => A letter to the man I loved like no other.... [bodytext] => Just a short note to thankyou
for the last 5 years
these things I need to say to you
theses things you need to hear.
Thanks for all the pain you've caused
and thanks for all the tears
heres to you my darling
raise your glass...CHEERS!!!
Thanks for taking me for granted
and treating me like a slave
thanks for acting like neanderthall man
Ive loved living in this cave.
Thanks for crushing my spirit
and turning my heart to ice
thanks for the emotional abuse
its been really nice.
Incase you havent noticed
Im being sarcastic here
just go back to your mates
and keep guzzling your beer.
Because Im over you now
Im walking out the door
Im finally saying goodbye to you
you wont see me any more. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 56 [informant] => angel71 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => sarcasticpoetry )

Dear Allan....

Contributed by angel71 on Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry

Just a short note to thankyou
for the last 5 years
these things I need to say to you
theses things you need to hear.
Thanks for all the pain you've caused
and thanks for all the tears
heres to you my darling
raise your glass...CHEERS!!!
Thanks for taking me for granted
and treating me like a slave
thanks for acting like neanderthall man
Ive loved living in this cave.
Thanks for crushing my spirit
and turning my heart to ice
thanks for the emotional abuse
its been really nice.
Incase you havent noticed
Im being sarcastic here
just go back to your mates
and keep guzzling your beer.
Because Im over you now
Im walking out the door
Im finally saying goodbye to you
you wont see me any more.

Copyright © angel71 ... [ 2003-04-02 20:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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