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serene measures within moments.
Sitting, holding onto the fading sun
its rays warm on my face.

Ignoring the city noise
shutting out emotional ties.
Even for brief moments
bask in the beauty of the fall day.

Tiny wisps of wind,
a leaf here another there.
Carefully drifting to their final spot
to rest through winter upon the ground. [comments] => 10 [counter] => 316 [topic] => 43 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Flutter

Contributed by shelby on Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 05:36:41 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The moment of peaceful calm
serene measures within moments.
Sitting, holding onto the fading sun
its rays warm on my face.

Ignoring the city noise
shutting out emotional ties.
Even for brief moments
bask in the beauty of the fall day.

Tiny wisps of wind,
a leaf here another there.
Carefully drifting to their final spot
to rest through winter upon the ground.

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2009-11-03 17:36:41]
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Re: Flutter (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 05:56:08 PM AEST
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OH sweetie, this is so amazing! There is such a soft loveliness in your
words. I felt as if I was sitting there with you, enjoying the quiet, ignoring
the city and just breathing in the beauty. The leaves were in full force
today. And this poem was so perfectly topical. ^_^

Beautiful writing hun.

*hugs*

~ Breezy

Re: Flutter (User Rating: 1 )
by dirk-velvet on Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 06:34:46 PM AEST
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i know that feeling.

the rays of the sun resting on your face.

and the wind...

You have captured it well !

lovely read.

Re: Flutter (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 05:56:19 AM AEST
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Hi Michelle

Relaxation and observation!

Well versed!

Tommy

Re: Flutter (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 12:47:40 PM AEST
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Fantastic picture painted here. I like it very much.

Deadwriter

Re: Flutter (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 01:58:58 PM AEST
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Thank you for sharing this moment
of contentment and peace
Always nice to slow down for those

Hugs and love
Kara

Re: Flutter (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 07:06:25 PM AEST
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Hi, dear friend:
Thanks a lot. Great writting!
I can see you basking in the sunshine and reading a wonderful book, how amazing! really a beautiful picture!
Well done, I love it!
Hugs and take care.

Re: Flutter (User Rating: 1 )
by Vic on Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 11:13:12 AM AEST
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Hey Michelle,

how are you?
Thank you for sharing this fantastic piece of art with all of us.

love and peace

Vic

Re: Flutter (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 06:31:02 PM AEST
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Hey, Shall...
There's nothing more grounding, for me
at least, than reconnecting with nature, be
that the sea, the woods, or the mountains,
so I can really appreciate a piece like this
that can actually take me there, if only in
words. It's a lovely, lingering write that I
will come back to often. Great job!

Luff,
~d

Re: Flutter (User Rating: 1 )
by Sophia on Friday, 6th November 2009 @ 02:11:37 AM AEST
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Just beautiful. I really love the imagery and the idea of 'holding onto the fading sun'.......exactly how one feels in a moment like that. Really lovely poem :)

S

Re: Flutter (User Rating: 1 )
by boredtrucker on Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 06:41:19 AM AEST
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a day in which i could partake, if only time would permit

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