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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Brilliant Soul
[time] => 2003-04-02 19:30:53
[hometext] => to a guy i love, but can't have. he doesn't even know i love him.
[bodytext] => He may be small in stature
But not in his ideas He has a beautiful mind Just like his heart I feel I could look at him From dawn 'till dusk and back again What else is there to say about his ongoing vibrance The only thing left unsaid Is that God made him with care His smile, it's amazing And when it's set on his face It's breathtaking He's not a person to speak his feelings So whenever we talk I hear the mystery in his voice And I can't help but wonder What could wound his brilliant soul? Behind his given gifts, he's a person playing hide-and-seek with anyone but her. Behind the expanse of his hazel eyes, there's so much pain, but it's never expressed by him. There are times we talk and I lose sight of our conversation just to think about his mystery. At times he makes me feel like a part of him: there, but removed. He gets lost in his own thoughts. Won't he ever share what he feels with me? Can't he point at me over her and say 'she's the one?' I can't help but wonder: What is buried in his brilliant soul? I can't say I know him well And if I did, he'd throw a fit. I don't know whether I'll ever understand him, or my love for him. But given the person I am, I hope he finds a way to remember me. I would walk there and back with him, carry him if I could. He'll stumble and fall, but I want him to know he can turn back to me. And I'll always wonder: Did I do enough to heal his brilliant soul? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 55 [informant] => hoping_to_be_Me [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
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