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Shaking House
Contributed by
anonymous1212
on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 06:24:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This houses walls
They storm and shake
The inner being
Alone it quakes
The screams so loud
Are silent alone
The world is bright
Outside this home
This little heart
It nears on breaking
And weakens from
The house that’s shaking
And the voice that comes
From this little heart
Holds thoughts
To tear this house apart
This shaking house
Is not home
And the souls inside
They drift alone
And the souls may drift on
Their own way
Until it comes
Their dying day
The shaking house
Yearns to see better
But cannot escape
This stormy weather
So on and on
The thunder rolls
And this shattered house
It takes its toll
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anonymous1212
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2009-11-03 06:24:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Shaking House
(User Rating: 1 ) by jenniferstein2006 on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 06:48:02 AM AEST (User
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i cannot explain how i feel about this...its just so great! you've totally captured how i feel right now and how many others feel as well...love it |
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Re: Shaking House
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Thursday, 12th August 2010 @ 09:44:29 PM AEST (User
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This is something that goes right to the readers heart and rests there.
Incredible verse but haunting and sad to me, relatable.
Michelle |
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