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Array ( [sid] => 154520 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I don't let you go [time] => 2009-10-29 05:20:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I don't let you go
2008-07-21 14:36:01
I don't let you go

I don't let you go,

the tears run down my cheeks,

why do you want to leave?

with so much to say,

but I don't know how to open my mouth.

Don't go away,

do you bear to turn around again?

Oh,

I can't think of my life after leaving you,

do you really have the heart to refuse once again?

Is our fate just like the cloud drift?

why do we part with dry lips?

my love for you still has many ramifications,

I want to cuddle you,

but you have grasped both my hands.

I don't want to think I am right or wrong,

but I can accept everything you want.

Your face mirrors your concern for me,

but I can only hear the weeping willowing laugh in the breeze,

just like nothing can come back after sunset fades.

Well,

nothing can rekindle your extinct passion now,

I let you go.

I will drop your hands slowly,

I hope you wave at me as before when you take the sadness of leaving away.

Good bye to my dreams,

I will still give you my best wishes even if you can't remain.

Yes,

I finally will let you go,

please don't look behind,

don't worry about me again.

The road extends for miles and miles,

you are going far away from me,

looking at your back,

my heart has broken.

Well,

let you go,

let my tears flow......

I knew you would leave me one day,

you are so predicatable,

but I will never be regret,

for I knew I shouldn't love you early.

Although I knew loving you was a mistake,

I didn't want to let you leave our love room,

and I couldn't give up our love.

Formless shadows, ideas, dreams,

all are far away from me now,

why is the canopy of the heavens so grey today?

even the summit of mountain is grey too.

Oh,

you disappeared in a twinkling of an eye,

what if it was true?

I have no idea now how to find my way,

but wish you happiness and have good luck.

Ok,

let me go back!

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I don't let you go

Contributed by holy on Thursday, 29th October 2009 @ 05:20:31 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I don't let you go
2008-07-21 14:36:01
I don't let you go

I don't let you go,

the tears run down my cheeks,

why do you want to leave?

with so much to say,

but I don't know how to open my mouth.

Don't go away,

do you bear to turn around again?

Oh,

I can't think of my life after leaving you,

do you really have the heart to refuse once again?

Is our fate just like the cloud drift?

why do we part with dry lips?

my love for you still has many ramifications,

I want to cuddle you,

but you have grasped both my hands.

I don't want to think I am right or wrong,

but I can accept everything you want.

Your face mirrors your concern for me,

but I can only hear the weeping willowing laugh in the breeze,

just like nothing can come back after sunset fades.

Well,

nothing can rekindle your extinct passion now,

I let you go.

I will drop your hands slowly,

I hope you wave at me as before when you take the sadness of leaving away.

Good bye to my dreams,

I will still give you my best wishes even if you can't remain.

Yes,

I finally will let you go,

please don't look behind,

don't worry about me again.

The road extends for miles and miles,

you are going far away from me,

looking at your back,

my heart has broken.

Well,

let you go,

let my tears flow......

I knew you would leave me one day,

you are so predicatable,

but I will never be regret,

for I knew I shouldn't love you early.

Although I knew loving you was a mistake,

I didn't want to let you leave our love room,

and I couldn't give up our love.

Formless shadows, ideas, dreams,

all are far away from me now,

why is the canopy of the heavens so grey today?

even the summit of mountain is grey too.

Oh,

you disappeared in a twinkling of an eye,

what if it was true?

I have no idea now how to find my way,

but wish you happiness and have good luck.

Ok,

let me go back!

Copyright © holy ... [ 2009-10-29 05:20:31]
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