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Array ( [sid] => 154511 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => alone [time] => 2009-10-29 00:05:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The night never seems to end
So lonely, the years seem to blend.
An aspiration enters the heart
Emotions fill the eyes,
Lost dreams; an ending… without a start.
With nowhere to go,
The lungs heave,
Longing for pristine air.
Blackened, a soul dimmed an unaware.
Visions enter the mind, I suffocate
Slowly fears begin to take.
Searching for the life line,
That will pull, from dreams that confine.
The clouds linger, the rain never subsides
Words that was never sincere, Will never reside.
Gathering reality left in all those lies,
thoughts blurred, shattered , worn with tries.
I sit, a soul barren, I can’t bare to say anymore
Others can never understand, living, breathing
Are my internal war…….
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alone

Contributed by recyclebin on Thursday, 29th October 2009 @ 12:05:15 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

The night never seems to end
So lonely, the years seem to blend.
An aspiration enters the heart
Emotions fill the eyes,
Lost dreams; an ending… without a start.
With nowhere to go,
The lungs heave,
Longing for pristine air.
Blackened, a soul dimmed an unaware.
Visions enter the mind, I suffocate
Slowly fears begin to take.
Searching for the life line,
That will pull, from dreams that confine.
The clouds linger, the rain never subsides
Words that was never sincere, Will never reside.
Gathering reality left in all those lies,
thoughts blurred, shattered , worn with tries.
I sit, a soul barren, I can’t bare to say anymore
Others can never understand, living, breathing
Are my internal war…….

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Re: alone (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 29th October 2009 @ 12:46:59 AM AEST
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I do understand but thank God for t.v., satilite and computors. Oh can't forget YPDC and all of you here.
Very sad so Please just cheer up?
Great writing, now please write me a happy write.
Big ole huggs, smiles, blessings, cheer,
emy

Re: alone (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 29th October 2009 @ 02:31:26 PM AEST
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Lord knows I've been here. So, there is one here who understands...for whatever that is worth.

I've missed you, my friend. Hate that I found you in such a soul-unsettling place. I am, however, glad to find you here.

Take care and I hope to find your soul in brighter days soon...

Kara

Re: alone (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 29th October 2009 @ 08:09:13 PM AEST
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I was wondering where you have been?
Yes I do also relate so I feel you and understand this.
Heart wrenching poem.
I hope the days are brighter for you.
If you dont cheer up I may have to hunt you down and make you laugh..........(you really do not want that to happen hee hee)

Hugs you tight and tighter

Michelle

Re: alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflyperfect on Monday, 16th May 2011 @ 10:28:37 PM AEST
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Many nights I sit and wonder when the pain will stop... when I will heal. My one thing I would never do though, would see that I was stronger than ever because of it... It is moments like this I remember because it is moments like this that have shaped me into a better person. I'm a survivor, so thats what I do... Just keep on pushing. I really like this poem in the sense that it embodies the emotions of lonliness and the power of the night when you truely feel most alone...

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