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Array ( [sid] => 154488 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drunken thoughts [time] => 2009-10-27 20:17:01 [hometext] => Comments welcome and hoped for but keep in mind I was drunk ;-D [bodytext] => Why can't I have it both ways,
A guy that loves me and one that stays,
I feel like every were I turn,
I get bull **** and slowly burn,

Why can't I find someone to care
As much for me as things that tear,
from the inside all the way through,
Until I don't know what to do,

If it were really true and dear,
then why am I the one that will tear,
I would give anything for him,
but he can't just stop on a whim,

I wish I knew what will come,
And not think I'm totally dumb,
when I think of all I went through,
and all there is left that I would do,

Why can't he stop what I need,
Even if I were to beg and plead,
but when it comes down to the wire,
I feel like I could catch fire,

It might be easier,
to think I should be more like her,
But I'm not and will never be,
why can't he stop even for me,

But since he won't can I endure,
what I just cannot simple cure,
Even when I cry and pout,
Inside of me there is know doubt,

that this is all there is for me,
to wish and hope for things that can't be,
maybe I can start to drink,
then I just won't have to think,

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 22 [informant] => shyness [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 Oct 28, 2009 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Drunken thoughts

Contributed by shyness on Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 08:17:01 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Why can't I have it both ways,
A guy that loves me and one that stays,
I feel like every were I turn,
I get bull **** and slowly burn,

Why can't I find someone to care
As much for me as things that tear,
from the inside all the way through,
Until I don't know what to do,

If it were really true and dear,
then why am I the one that will tear,
I would give anything for him,
but he can't just stop on a whim,

I wish I knew what will come,
And not think I'm totally dumb,
when I think of all I went through,
and all there is left that I would do,

Why can't he stop what I need,
Even if I were to beg and plead,
but when it comes down to the wire,
I feel like I could catch fire,

It might be easier,
to think I should be more like her,
But I'm not and will never be,
why can't he stop even for me,

But since he won't can I endure,
what I just cannot simple cure,
Even when I cry and pout,
Inside of me there is know doubt,

that this is all there is for me,
to wish and hope for things that can't be,
maybe I can start to drink,
then I just won't have to think,

Copyright Â© shyness ... [ 2009-10-27 20:17:01]
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Re: Drunken thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 09:34:48 PM AEST
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Dang intense verse, other than tons of type o's it is pretty good. Yes drinking and typing don't mix lol!

Hope things work out the way you need them to.
Have a great Halloween week

Michelle

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