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This night is dark and cold.
Octobers breath chilling.
A few nights off from Halloween.
The sight is growing darker.

Night zombies gather each night.
Making noise that shakes the moon,
but the moon ran to hide
tucked herself in between the clouds.

Now the world out my window is dark.
The wind is moaning,
the rain starts and stops.
The night zombies are out there I know
I hear them, but I cannot see them.

Will they come knocking on the door?

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Will he come knocking on the door?

Contributed by shelby on Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 07:40:03 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

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This night is dark and cold.
Octobers breath chilling.
A few nights off from Halloween.
The sight is growing darker.

Night zombies gather each night.
Making noise that shakes the moon,
but the moon ran to hide
tucked herself in between the clouds.

Now the world out my window is dark.
The wind is moaning,
the rain starts and stops.
The night zombies are out there I know
I hear them, but I cannot see them.

Will they come knocking on the door?

more later.........

Copyright Â© shelby ... [ 2009-10-27 19:40:03]
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Re: Will he come knocking on the door? (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 07:53:29 PM AEST
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Great write. It capures Halloween's spookiness perfectly. It's funny, I often get spooked a few nights before Halloween. I have an overactive imagination. Your poem was great!

Heidi

Re: Will he come knocking on the door? (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 09:04:45 PM AEST
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Celle this is mysterious, and leaves me wondering................''spooky too, I'm wondering if it has a double meaning?
Good poem, I enjoyed it.
Warm love
consue

Re: Will he come knocking on the door? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 11:48:21 PM AEST
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And the suspense builds. cool dude

cool dude

Re: Will he come knocking on the door? (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Wednesday, 28th October 2009 @ 04:06:20 AM AEST
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Hi Shel,

Great write! I'm glad I read it in the morning and
not before beddybyes!!

Scary ..........

Tommy

Re: Will he come knocking on the door? (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 28th October 2009 @ 08:08:48 AM AEST
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Dark becomes you, i like this,
it's not so much a poem as it
is real enough to be a warning
of things to come, truly a lesson
in the macarbre . . .

((((Michelle))))

ty like wise for visiting my mansion. lol.

Ben

Re: Will he come knocking on the door? (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Wednesday, 28th October 2009 @ 03:31:49 PM AEST
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zombies eh? pretty scary, yet fun
when u blast their heads off...
anywho, this gave me an ominous chill.
and the 2nd stanza was ingenious

take care

-K.Z.

Re: Will he come knocking on the door? (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 29th October 2009 @ 04:15:43 PM AEST
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Wow, you got me curious....

You can pull off so many styles.
I have always loved your work.
Keep up the great writing,
can't wait to read more

Hugs
Kara

Re: Will he come knocking on the door? (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Thursday, 29th October 2009 @ 06:28:00 PM AEST
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A great beginning my friend.

Thank you for your continued support.

Deadwriter

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