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Two
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Sunday, 25th October 2009 @ 01:32:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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birthday joys
and laughter
I hear them through
the window
up the drive
I brought you tulips
get it
tu lips
yours or mine
a room full
of family and husbands
couldn't afford
a back bedroom grope
so I wait
as always
telling you
she'll never be
as beautiful
as you
distracting you to make you feel good
endearing you to me
she's striking
you're mysterious
I still
wait for you....
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2009-10-25 13:32:29]
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Re: Two
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by shelby on
Sunday, 25th October 2009 @ 08:09:37 PM AEST
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Another very well written verse.
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Re: Two
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 10:08:38 AM AEST
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i see your cheering-up efforts for the birthday celebrant.
girls sometimes....
haha
take care
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