|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Waiting for you
Contributed by
holy
on
Saturday, 24th October 2009 @ 06:33:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
Waiting for you
2008-07-18 22:01:55
Waiting for you
I had never had a vision of my lover,
till one day,
you came to me.
You surprised me,
I felt you were just the right man I was looking for,
so I gave you a smile.
Frankly speaking,
I loved you when I met you the first time.
You couldn't think how glad I was to see you,
in my mind,
I even visualized that I will marry with you.
Looking over the street,
a large crowd there,
you were standing beside me,
like my perfect man,
how hoped I could say you a word.
We were both skirted,
I hoped you could cross my path again.
To my surprise,
you came to me again,
although you were in a silence,
I could hear your heartbeat,
I smiled.
I said I was right here waiting for you,
you said you were standing beside me,
I smiled and said to you,
I was so glad you were here at last,
You laughed and told me,
never mind the causes,
let us take a short walk......
Never before,
walking with a stranger shoulder to shoulder.
That day,
it all happened in a split second,
I was very close to you a stranger walking and talking,
it seemed everything you talking about with me was very interesting.
As if in a sweet dream,
I was enjoying in it.
between the sky and earth,
as if only a line.
When I was trying to hold your hand,
I heard my breath was fast and hard.
Yes,
at that moment,
I could almost see our future.
I felt very warm staying with you,
I wanted to say all our past days for you.
When I saw you smiling at me,
my muscles relaxed,
so I didn't bother to say anything any more,
for you took me by hand and told me there was coming a car......
Copyright ©
holy
... [
2009-10-24 06:33:20] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Waiting for you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Alexa_Bachtel on
Saturday, 24th October 2009 @ 09:20:28 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Beautiful poem!!! Good Work.
Alexa. |
|
|
Re: Waiting for you
(User Rating: 1 ) by joydeep_nath on
Saturday, 24th October 2009 @ 09:31:22 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
beautifully written..simple yet effective |
|
|
|