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Array ( [sid] => 154306 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => oh no not me [time] => 2009-10-21 11:34:00 [hometext] => preying the lives of others [bodytext] => your someone who became nothing,
cold your life, forever to be, you just dont see,
you give nothing but take all you can take.
you dont even know that you are fake.
wicked words spill from your soul,
wishing only gloom and doom on those you consume.
your hands are idle, no work have you done,
oh but one day you will meet the son.
take from all that will give, this is how you live.
with forked lies, you desguise, on the unknowing you prey,
rob and steal all that is real, you lead them astray,
only to stay untill you suck them dry,
then leave them to cry,
what a fool they have been,
to be consumed in your sin,
left them to die,
as you look for the next passer by.
to rob there soul to make you feel whole.
oh but not me, the truth is what I see.
you can never prey on me.
although you'll try with all your lies,
to tear me down and make me drown,
your just someone who became nothing.
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oh no not me

Contributed by longhaircg on Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 11:34:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

your someone who became nothing,
cold your life, forever to be, you just dont see,
you give nothing but take all you can take.
you dont even know that you are fake.
wicked words spill from your soul,
wishing only gloom and doom on those you consume.
your hands are idle, no work have you done,
oh but one day you will meet the son.
take from all that will give, this is how you live.
with forked lies, you desguise, on the unknowing you prey,
rob and steal all that is real, you lead them astray,
only to stay untill you suck them dry,
then leave them to cry,
what a fool they have been,
to be consumed in your sin,
left them to die,
as you look for the next passer by.
to rob there soul to make you feel whole.
oh but not me, the truth is what I see.
you can never prey on me.
although you'll try with all your lies,
to tear me down and make me drown,
your just someone who became nothing.

Copyright © longhaircg ... [ 2009-10-21 11:34:00]
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Re: oh no not me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 08:23:04 PM AEST
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Incredible and expressive poem.
Yes I have had my fair share of people like this the past while., It is a sad shame that people are so cruel. I say kick em in their pants lol.... Who needs that stuff right?

Hugs
Michelle

Re: oh no not me (User Rating: 1 )
by MorguesMatter on Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 04:37:23 AM AEST
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Others may not realize what you really mean, for they are ever consumed it is their life to them a right.Those of us who can see the lies are in danger and must stick together for as we speak there is a whole nation of fool's being deceived as they worship their race,their parties and their war machines.Keep spreading the word as I know you will-Morgues

Re: oh no not me (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 06:09:07 PM AEST
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BRAVO!BRAVO!BRAVO! Susan this is fantastic!
Well written, and very meaningful.........you are definitely a wonderful expressive poet, indeed!
I love your decisiveness..........so many people now-a-days can't make up their minds...........but not YOU!!!! Sever all your ties to this person, or his Demons will overcome you too!
WELCOME TO YPDC. You're going to love it here........we'll support you in all you do, whether it be poetry, or just your life.
We're so glad you joined our family.
Warm love to you
Lovingcritters
and since I'm so old they all call me
MomConSue*smiles*
Thank you again for your lovely comment

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