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[title] => Voyage of the Red Sun
[time] => 2009-10-21 00:44:35
[hometext] => I might have to make it into a short story. I wrote it to explore primal human nature.
[bodytext] => We walked and thought and talked I liked everyone in my group and they all liked me As we made sense of the chaos the sun went down The sky was made for us The red setting sun brought us closer We sat around the fire feeling hopelessly content A good meal brings silence We thought some more and I listened Our dreams were different, but our desires one As I fell asleep a wolf howled I felt safe, there were plenty of bullets We took turns keeping watch as dreams chased us The morning was baked by the sun Its violent furnace gives us life, and life beauty I wouldn’t want to die on a sunny day Rocks melted as we got to their village Vengeance took its toll on us but we had to finish Their blood assured our survival We left death behind and walked We marveled at the gorges and the trees above I saw one of their young hiding in a bush We were once children like him His innocence and fear reflected ours We pondered his loyalty We told stories as the child stared He lost his identity but we knew were he’d find it We armed him and sent him first into the next village [comments] => 2 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 31 [informant] => yourstruly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
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