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He's far away, it's a four hour drive

I make you feel pretty, and help your brain thrive

He's eager but meager, and quiet and prim

I sync to your being, and every last whim

Our concert is growing, and as they look on

You try and ignore the conclusion foregone

We grapple and wrestle, and don't say what is

Living in our hearts, and not within his

It wakes me and holds me, and won't let me go

Though we've never said it, the each of us know

That take it or leave it, that something is there

So I pray you realize, although we're both scared

That if we keep going, at this sluggish pace

Neither of us will know love's true embrace
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Because I'll Never Tell

Contributed by TheBeardedWander on Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 07:37:31 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

He's far away, it's a four hour drive

I make you feel pretty, and help your brain thrive

He's eager but meager, and quiet and prim

I sync to your being, and every last whim

Our concert is growing, and as they look on

You try and ignore the conclusion foregone

We grapple and wrestle, and don't say what is

Living in our hearts, and not within his

It wakes me and holds me, and won't let me go

Though we've never said it, the each of us know

That take it or leave it, that something is there

So I pray you realize, although we're both scared

That if we keep going, at this sluggish pace

Neither of us will know love's true embrace

Copyright © TheBeardedWander ... [ 2009-10-20 19:37:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Because I'll Never Tell (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 11:02:40 PM AEST
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enjoyed this poem a good dose of reality and and an impatience for a conclusion such that mayb the poem is strong until the last 2 lines

Re: Because I'll Never Tell (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 11:03:37 PM AEST
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i liked the back and forth of this....there's so much wasted time ....you have a really great write here....

Re: Because I'll Never Tell (User Rating: 1 )
by Alexa_Bachtel on Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 08:43:57 AM AEST
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It's wonderful poem. I loved it so much. You're the great writer.
Alex.

Re: Because I'll Never Tell (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 23rd October 2009 @ 06:18:18 PM AEST
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I liked this it has a beat to it that moves the reader right along.

The end line kind of sad though......

Michelle

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