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2008-07-15 13:48:48
Naked secret

As if a large passenger airliner to star,

my heart is already off the ground earlier,

and keeping it the air......

I dare not to look at you,

I am afraid you will see my thought at the moment.

So I have to try to push you away,

and to breathe the fresh air to the top of my bent.

Go on,

enjoy myself,

let me go!

I try to make some jokes at full steam for a escape,

but I don't know what to say can get back myself,

I wonder what make me feel so close to you,

even have no any distance between us.

Is it more fatal?

or we had met long long ago?

I am grateful to you by stealth,

how want to ask you for the taste again!

but I am afraid of love,

for love is sharper than blade.

I am spoon on you,

but I have to leave you.

I will be eternally grateful to you,

I am going to leave for a long long way,

just leave a naked secret of loving you.

The following days,

if you feel on the thought that will be a wonderful memory.

I am revisiting a once familiar place,

suddenly meeting the rain in the way,

but I dare not stop now,

I must to manage to glide the plane to a safe landing.

I am alone flying over the rain quietly,

carefully and carefully!

My heart with our naked secret,

forget to escape the rain crying,

as if a underdog,

closing to tears,

forget to cry in the lonely space......

Let rain clean my window,

as I can hardly see out.

Let rain follow me to oscillate,

it just can feel love's taste.

Yes,

yesterday have passed away,

our naked sectet will stay here forever,

just like my opening heart with my favor,

still here......

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Naked secret

Contributed by holy on Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 06:32:41 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Naked secret
2008-07-15 13:48:48
Naked secret

As if a large passenger airliner to star,

my heart is already off the ground earlier,

and keeping it the air......

I dare not to look at you,

I am afraid you will see my thought at the moment.

So I have to try to push you away,

and to breathe the fresh air to the top of my bent.

Go on,

enjoy myself,

let me go!

I try to make some jokes at full steam for a escape,

but I don't know what to say can get back myself,

I wonder what make me feel so close to you,

even have no any distance between us.

Is it more fatal?

or we had met long long ago?

I am grateful to you by stealth,

how want to ask you for the taste again!

but I am afraid of love,

for love is sharper than blade.

I am spoon on you,

but I have to leave you.

I will be eternally grateful to you,

I am going to leave for a long long way,

just leave a naked secret of loving you.

The following days,

if you feel on the thought that will be a wonderful memory.

I am revisiting a once familiar place,

suddenly meeting the rain in the way,

but I dare not stop now,

I must to manage to glide the plane to a safe landing.

I am alone flying over the rain quietly,

carefully and carefully!

My heart with our naked secret,

forget to escape the rain crying,

as if a underdog,

closing to tears,

forget to cry in the lonely space......

Let rain clean my window,

as I can hardly see out.

Let rain follow me to oscillate,

it just can feel love's taste.

Yes,

yesterday have passed away,

our naked sectet will stay here forever,

just like my opening heart with my favor,

still here......

Copyright © holy ... [ 2009-10-20 18:32:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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