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Array ( [sid] => 154244 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => We both got wet [time] => 2009-10-19 18:31:06 [hometext] => [bodytext] => We both got wet
2008-07-14 14:40:30
We both got wet



The storm burst,

and we both got wet,

our faces were full of rain,

but we couldn't wipe them away.

Forget!

let us get more wet!



There was only a big tree before us,

we ran to it with hand in hand,

I wondered why we had the same way then,

I was pleased to hear your shout,

Wow,

we were both so wet!



Yes,

we had the same speed,

although you were taller than me.

When you looked down into my eyes,

I could see your warm heart.



Flying,

I suddenly felt I was flying in the sky,

for I was as light as the air then.

I gave you a smile to reply your quesiton,

then told you it will be very dangerous under the tree.

You put your hands around my shoulders,

with a simple smile to say don't worry.



Be sure,

The blue sky waiting the white clouds,

was moved that day by a couple of lovers.

When it was waiting for the wild wind,

it fell into sleep.

When it awake from its dream,

and saw us hiding under the dangerous tree,

it opened its mouth quickly and blew all the raindrops away......



But we had caught the storm,

we were both very wet.

But at that time,

we had the same word,

to share the clean air.

Our story was still going on its way,

we were walking around our city shoulder to shoulder......



We were walking and talking on our way home.

When you touched my wet clothes,

I felt your temperature,

I didn't know what could say,

only asked you a fool question,

" Do you like our city?"

You laughed and asked me back,

"Do you feel my body temperature?"

I said nothing but a naughty smile,

Indeed,

at that moment,

I was asking myself,

"How do you feel?"

......

......

......







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We both got wet

Contributed by holy on Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 06:31:06 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



We both got wet
2008-07-14 14:40:30
We both got wet



The storm burst,

and we both got wet,

our faces were full of rain,

but we couldn't wipe them away.

Forget!

let us get more wet!



There was only a big tree before us,

we ran to it with hand in hand,

I wondered why we had the same way then,

I was pleased to hear your shout,

Wow,

we were both so wet!



Yes,

we had the same speed,

although you were taller than me.

When you looked down into my eyes,

I could see your warm heart.



Flying,

I suddenly felt I was flying in the sky,

for I was as light as the air then.

I gave you a smile to reply your quesiton,

then told you it will be very dangerous under the tree.

You put your hands around my shoulders,

with a simple smile to say don't worry.



Be sure,

The blue sky waiting the white clouds,

was moved that day by a couple of lovers.

When it was waiting for the wild wind,

it fell into sleep.

When it awake from its dream,

and saw us hiding under the dangerous tree,

it opened its mouth quickly and blew all the raindrops away......



But we had caught the storm,

we were both very wet.

But at that time,

we had the same word,

to share the clean air.

Our story was still going on its way,

we were walking around our city shoulder to shoulder......



We were walking and talking on our way home.

When you touched my wet clothes,

I felt your temperature,

I didn't know what could say,

only asked you a fool question,

" Do you like our city?"

You laughed and asked me back,

"Do you feel my body temperature?"

I said nothing but a naughty smile,

Indeed,

at that moment,

I was asking myself,

"How do you feel?"

......

......

......











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Re: We both got wet (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 06:49:15 PM AEST
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Re: We both got wet (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 07:27:28 PM AEST
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A nice write here, you took us on an adventure here, made me smile.

Michelle




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